I think the top of your R needs to be as big as the top of your A. And the top of the C to come down to the middle of the H. I'm feeling that H, too
I think the top of your R needs to be as big as the top of your A. And the top of the C to come down to the middle of the H. I'm feeling that H, too
I like that ribs. Atak you have to get used to it, its kind of like the first couple weeks in prison. Once you progress people will stop treating you like shit.
Anyone else getting that stupid pro2leet.com page when they try to go to the forums?
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except in prison people don't let up on you, unless you eat the cock meat sandwhich. But on the real, they don't. They decide to fuck with you, theyre gonna keep fucking with you until your out, or you somehow do something to change their mind, which isnt easy.
If you act like a bitch after getting treated like shit, then your going to be treated like a shitty bitch. and NO ONE likes a shitty bitch.
@Task bring that line of the kick of the J down farther, that one looks waaay to beefy. Oh and where the bottoms at? lol never see any bottoms from you, what happens when you paint a spot high up and you cant reach the floor of the surface?
hahahah wow kids eh
JEST getting better my dude keep it up son
Eps ACK:
Phat what paint do you guys use out there?
There ya go ribs!
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the P looks like an F, the M doesn't really look like anything, and the T looks like a faceless elephant. Go simpler
take a better pic
but what i can see sucks just nees work adn the 3Ds are waaaayyyyy offf there are no vanishing points
i dont like that E nor A c is allright work on it ya feel me?Originally Posted by ribcage
agreed... that names kinda weak anyways
I feel like an idiot for posting a throwie attempt, but still I need/wanting crits on it.
First attempt with this name/serious attempt in doing anything.
Don't do that bottom of the paper shit, man.
You're gonna have to learn how to finish the letter eventually.
Crits on this bullshit ass throw, please.
@Jest: I lol'd when I saw that instead of differing from your ususal bottom letter chop-off by doing the whole letter, you chopped your shit off at the top.
Man, finish all of your letters. It may look cool to you in your blackbook, but that shit will look WACK on the bottom of a wall, because it won't attract any attention. Your graff needs to be generally high for people to see. Ultimately, Practice your throws in it's full form not in it's partial form. That's why we're here.
@ Skina: Word, tell someone they need to work on something, but don't actually tell them what you think they should work on. Us toys need to know what to practice, otherwise we'll be running in circles forever.
Last edited by IbuprofenTablets; 05-04-2011 at 09:36 PM.
Ehhhhh.
I think its an improvement, but need some heavy crits.
I like your shit though Ibu.
hey y'all sorry bout the camera, i don't kno squat bout throws. somebody wit it on a xchange??1
btw skina i feela ya on it need work an all, but i was goin for a outline not 3d.
Last edited by Tempo718; 05-04-2011 at 09:44 PM.
Where is the M and the P, and no offense but that needs to be reworked heavily. but I will do an exchange, hit me up with a message.
@ Jekl:
Your top throw flows well, however that style's VERY typical IMO. So I personally wouldn't fuck with it, but that's just on account of my taste.
Also, the left left of your K on the top throw is a little hidden, I'd recommend toning down that gangsta' lean on your E just a smidgen'.
Furthermore, don't fuck with those pointy styles just yet, those styles are a little too advanced, most people flip that style end up failing at it (like myself), so I'd try doing it like a year or two for now. I've seen some people flip that style and have it look fresh, like some dude named B.S. Police that used to come on here.
Ohh, and make your shit look like a J, not an S(regarding your top throw).
Last edited by IbuprofenTablets; 05-04-2011 at 09:54 PM.
Yeah man, thanks on the crits.
The top one is basic and I got the idea I can just add or modify to the base structure to change it to something fresh.
Hitting the notebook again for the rest of the night.
And I seen B.S. Police's work, I like it.
DROP the add ons and its mad busyCrits on this bullshit ass throw, please.
@Jest: I lol'd when I saw that instead of differing from your ususal bottom letter chop-off by doing the whole letter, you chopped your shit off at the top.
Man, finish all of your letters. It may look cool to you in your blackbook, but that shit will look WACK on the bottom of a wall, because it won't attract any attention. Your graff needs to be generally high for people to see. Ultimately, Practice your throws in it's full form not in it's partial form. That's why we're here.
@ Skina: Word, tell someone they need to work on something, but don't actually tell them what you think they should work on. Us toys need to know what to practice, otherwise we'll be running in circles forever.
heres one for a jekl exchango
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