yo pesoe your o looks like a c
endingtotalsocial: you need to stop quoting old posts please. thanks.
Not very clean I know. With that said: Any crits?
yes alot of crits but im not going to write all of them now
letter dont flow try simp letters then but miny add ons to make them look like throws i did it al look at all my throws there one of the best in the toy throw forums IMO
Thoughts? Just a simple bomb.
EDIT: I know the lines and circles are uneven. Just a quick sketch of my idea.
Critics please? pointers?tips? I'm going bombing tonight.
please dont go bombing if this is what you are putting up..
for crits, if you are going to have no space in the ISH, then i would just use a line as the whole in the O.
Push those letters closer and work on a steadier hand.
isho, my *****
as strongly as i encourage you to go bombing tonight, despite what your peers say (that practice is critical to progression,) that throw is wack.
this is basically your throw, but with some CW help. i strongly recommend you bite the shit out of this.
also, when you go to paint, move with your letters. dont just stand still and move your arm at the shoulder, but sway with your letter. and if you have the chance, take a few steps back and look at your throw before you "bounce." see what youve done wrong and take note on what needs improving. theres no reason you cant improve that very next throwy that you do 1-5-whatever minutes from now.
dont get caught.
edit: and, no, im not saying my throw is perfect.
Last edited by ChadWarden; 06-07-2011 at 07:14 PM.
Hope it shows... I've just started like 1 1/2 week ago dudes..
Last edited by VeX'D; 06-08-2011 at 04:14 PM.
CHADWARDEN in that throw you did your I looks like a dick your S looks like an ass the H looks like 2 asses mashed togehter and that O looks like an ass. ISHO don't use that, also practice man you'll get there. but get good then paint don't make your town hate graffiti more then it already does by putting up ugly shit, also all the local heads will think your wack as fuck. Don't take offence im just saying.
i popsted this before but it was small heres it bigger
left one has key lime force feild you cant see it tho in this photo i guess
Last edited by thatswhatshesaid; 06-07-2011 at 09:44 PM.
well i beleive im makin progress crits please
thatswhatshesaid, those 3 gaps are very ugly dude... close em up
and it's not clear what it says, only clear letter is the G... then there's an O, then there's either 2 A's or 2 R's
also, the sharp edges in the G's middle bar aren't working when all your throw has rounded edges
Pointers, critics, tips? I just started about a month ago.
Last edited by Isho; 06-08-2011 at 04:42 PM.
dont bother with forcefield just focus on the letters
let me help dont pay 10 15 for a blackbook so u can doodle toy shit in it get notebook paper its cheap