Throwies

[thatswhatshesaid]

yo pesoe your o looks like a c

[chen]

What you think?

[Phat 2]

endingtotalsocial: you need to stop quoting old posts please. thanks.

[lost is gettin up]

Not very clean I know. With that said: Any crits?

[skinaone]

yes alot of crits but im not going to write all of them now
letter dont flow try simp letters then but miny add ons to make them look like throws i did it al look at all my throws there one of the best in the toy throw forums IMO

[lost is gettin up]

yes alot of crits but im not going to write all of them now
letter dont flow try simp letters then but miny add ons to make them look like throws i did it al look at all my throws there one of the best in the toy throw forums IMO

Your throws are sick as sin skina thx for the crits

[Ace.K]

Thoughts? Just a simple bomb.

EDIT: I know the lines and circles are uneven. Just a quick sketch of my idea.

[Isho]

Critics please? pointers?tips? I'm going bombing tonight.

[dankbudz]

please dont go bombing if this is what you are putting up..

for crits, if you are going to have no space in the ISH, then i would just use a line as the whole in the O.
Push those letters closer and work on a steadier hand.

[Isho]

How about now?

[thatswhatshesaid]

nope

[ChadWarden]

isho, my *****


as strongly as i encourage you to go bombing tonight, despite what your peers say (that practice is critical to progression,) that throw is wack.



this is basically your throw, but with some CW help. i strongly recommend you bite the shit out of this.

also, when you go to paint, move with your letters. dont just stand still and move your arm at the shoulder, but sway with your letter. and if you have the chance, take a few steps back and look at your throw before you "bounce." see what youve done wrong and take note on what needs improving. theres no reason you cant improve that very next throwy that you do 1-5-whatever minutes from now.


dont get caught.



edit: and, no, im not saying my throw is perfect.

[VeX'D]

Hope it shows... I've just started like 1 1/2 week ago dudes..

Any crits?

[thatswhatshesaid]

CHADWARDEN in that throw you did your I looks like a dick your S looks like an ass the H looks like 2 asses mashed togehter and that O looks like an ass. ISHO don't use that, also practice man you'll get there. but get good then paint don't make your town hate graffiti more then it already does by putting up ugly shit, also all the local heads will think your wack as fuck. Don't take offence im just saying.

i popsted this before but it was small heres it bigger



left one has key lime force feild you cant see it tho in this photo i guess

[OZON]

well i beleive im makin progress crits please

[Phat 2]

thatswhatshesaid, those 3 gaps are very ugly dude... close em up
and it's not clear what it says, only clear letter is the G... then there's an O, then there's either 2 A's or 2 R's
also, the sharp edges in the G's middle bar aren't working when all your throw has rounded edges

[Isho]

Pointers, critics, tips? I just started about a month ago.

[nah!]

dont bother with forcefield just focus on the letters

[Drez]

Pointers, critics, tips? I just started about a month ago.

Blackbook ISHO. Practice everyday and keep progressing your letters. I know it gets annoying hearing everyone saying "blackbook,blackbook,blackbook." but its the truth. Anyone can pick up a can of paint and spray on a wall, but it takes true heart to progress and get better. A big problem i notice in your tag is lazy fill, terrible shading, and a very uneven outline. Like i said, practice in your blackbook for a while before you go bombing again. Because what you threw up right there looks incredibly toy. With practice, your letters will flow, and you will learn how to paint. (And when doing your fill, go either left to right or top to bottom and stick with it.)

[H1P30N3R]

let me help dont pay 10 15 for a blackbook so u can doodle toy shit in it get notebook paper its cheap