why is he on a ladder?
take a wild guess... or more like a wild look
a quick trow up ARTS yeah.
Kind of a old throwie I used. But I got bored of it, but I came back to it... And I like it.
Crits. (Yes I know S is not proportional, and yes now I realize I'm missing the line on my N.)
and he's on a ladder because he was cleaning the high top of that shutter
those 2 shutters have been closed for years and no one's touched them yet. they're filthy, you should've seen the dust fall off them whil he was cleaning em. damn.
but turns out I gave the owner a wake up call by bombing em. that worker's cleaning the dust off so that he could later paint both shutters with white paint... I passed by again later and the things were squeeky clean haha.
looks like it left a hallow less he went back over again p kinda looks like t at first glance tho
be sure to thank them when you do
Geza- that r gets too small, and dont do throws at the bottom unless you fit the bottom of the letters too.
Syn- be steadier with your hand or faster, maybe simplify your letters a bit and straighten them up.
Phat not hating but you should change your throws up a bit and progress it. I get the idea of recognition but you have to let your letters progress too, do a few different throws or something.
repost for crits
Last edited by Norfsuthr; 09-27-2011 at 05:23 PM.
Fed, put the letters closer togeter, or slightly overlap them, otherwise, good letters
actually do a throw up man those just look like really weak straights
I'm working on like throwups that aren't overlapping, its intentional. Apparently I don't have it right yet, so thanks
Last edited by Phat 2; 09-28-2011 at 07:47 AM.
lol, you could post all the flix at once, man.
Some stupid flicks for crits. The shitty colors were all I had here. In diff apartment, I keep my stuff.
For simpler ones I didn't get crit, so i tried more complex, turned out looking like shit. Fucked up the second one with old white marker.
Edit: and phat, i think ur usual throw is much better than this ph bomb.
Last edited by SneeZ; 09-28-2011 at 07:33 AM.