I think it's pretty cool at a first glance, but lots of room for improvement for sure.
The T Kind of overpowers the rest of the piece per se. Don't really see a problem with the O. The X definitely needs some work, and you know that. So do some work or something... The I is very hidden behind the X, yous should bring that out more. I thought the C was an attempt at a T? Or like an unfinished charecter? Try to make it look more like C.
@ATAK - X's are a bitch for throws, especially when they're in bubble. and toxic is a pretty toy name, just sayin
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tried to come up with a one liner
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That second picture is the best thing I think I've ever seen from you. Try and work on that. The first pictures is ok.
The others are pretty shitty dude, I would work with the first two. And practice them a lot before you post them again.
hmm ight.
i thought the second was the worst
norf- that throw is sick!!
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tried to fix the k just now, yes no?
and norf i agree that throw is sick
shake, i like how the bottoms look in the first one(just not crossing over the lines) but the letters themselves look better in the second.... and k's are a bitch.
coleo work with simpler letters, and make them all the same size (i have troubles making them all relatively the same too)
That's K is a lot better than what it was before. I like it a lot better now. Still needs some work on the K though.
Everyone needs to stop trying so hard to make things look goo there is 0 flow on this page...
And there's a 'toxic' here in London that fuckin kils!
Broken Bones - TBSK MPDS DIGISIN 4298
Rough sketch and a slap. Props to H1P3 for the idea.
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I like that. I think the ES need some work, they're not quite the same looking style as the MU.
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