the second one looks like pesoe or somethin, not feelin that first letter.... and the cross and 4 dots in the O is overdone by a lot of writers... just make different faces in ur Os that are somewhat original
skad you should work on your letters some more im not really feelin the squariness of them all
Hipe and zook. I am in need of some inspiration for throws. Mine are super horrible and you guys motivate the shit out of me to work on them. If you guys could do some really basic hollows that say Antik I would greatly appriciate it. If not tottally cool too.
what do i need to do before this gets put into paint? talking more about formation of letters, ill play with adding shadow and colours later on
all crits appreciated
A couple starting points i guess.. crits appreciated
Fugg: I'm not one to crit throws as I don't really have a remotely decent one... but that's a little rough. I can't read it at all. try to simple it up and give your letters more deffinition. Don't fuck with decoration yet. Get your letters down.
Cisco: That's not a bad start. I assume it's DSP. Make that first letter a little more clear and get the top and bottom of your P to look not so broken.
new name, new throw.
I don't like that at all.
the L looks kinda like a cartoon middle finger. The I works, but the thing on the right side makes it a little awkward. The G could use some deffinition, it looks like it's collapsing on it's self. the H is hiding. The T looks like something just stuck on the end... maybe a C. Not trying to be harsh I struggle with them too. Only throw I've got is some boxes....
Thanks dude. Yeah it's hard for me to define my letters yet keep them in the same style. So I made sacrifices. Back to work.
if it makes you feel better, i was feeling that straight letter highway spot you did.
hmm... aight back to the drawing board I guess then...
anybody care to hit me with some venom throws to check what's good ?
edit: come to think about it, I actually intended to make it a vnm throw, bit then noticed I could throw a couple holes in the v and n and make it venom.
but suppose those holes didn't exist, and the throw actually read vnm instead of the whole venom word. and the tops of the m were shorter to match the height of the v and n..
suppose I made all those modifications and even lost the pointy bottoms. what would you think of it then? chadwarden?
I'll post a flick of the modified one later
Last edited by Phat 2; 01-18-2012 at 05:45 PM.
dont change ur name phat... i definitely read that throw as VNM though didnt even see the E or O til CW mentioned it... i say work on new phat2 throws if anything... venom is a shitty name and u actually put in work getting the name u have out there... i was told i might wanna change my name cuz theres a nems in ohio... but theres no nemor, and im not gonna throw away all that time and paint just because my name is kinda like someone else in my home state... sometimes the rules should be bent, no reason u shouldnt keep writing phat2