ASK are all wack
lol mues that one was too far back^^ i didnt see it.
the bottom of the E is weird, and its really small. try making it bubbly for now and extend it
And the top of the S seems too low, maybe bump it up a bit. or maybe just bump up the piointy part at the top
The bottom of the U is going to the right...make it stay under the actual part of the U
thats all i can think of but it is still nice my man
axi l- dont paint yet..stay on paper
thats not so bad, but:
- a general rule for throwups is to keep all of you letters the same size, and i suggest that you observe it.
- although your e is decent, it looks goofy because of the much smaller n and a.
- the little point you have on the top left of all your letters looks gay, with the exception of the the e. the e looks like it has horns or some shit.
-the bump on the bottom of your D (yes, i know) wouldnt look so bad if it connected with the rest of the letter
word, hope this helps.
@Dane the Bottom round part of the D and the round part of the a look off. Keep workin with it.
My first throwie concept, any tips for cleaning it up, want to go paint tonite.
Thanks for the tip good man, i'll work with it.
I love the concept but could use some definition on the S and E. Some lines for the holes maybe too.
Trying to clean it up, these are all quick concept sketches so they aren't very clean. Also ignore the shite tag. That need's work and i'm well aware haha.
Any tips on making the D in this one look less like an O?
Pass second one is much better
2 slaps i did out of boredom.
Last edited by cred1384; 03-20-2012 at 06:06 AM.