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    2 slaps i did out of boredom.

    Last edited by cred1384; 03-20-2012 at 05:06 AM.

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    pase - that shits awesome keep at it. i would say try to tweak the s some but your progression should be quick
    cred - those stickers are nice. try to make your R more noticeable

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    cred your sig is killin me
    ahh to fuckin high

    SO - throw some drop shadow on that

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    Pase: That shit is dope. I love the loseness of it.
    Cred: you're covering ground quick. Keep rockin.
    Killroy: Looking good stay up.

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    Two styles I've been screwing with to get the letters the way I want, or even close to resembling what they're supposed to.

    I wanna work off the first one, I like the feel of it when I write it. I just don't know what to do with the H or the Z.

    I've also been playing around with the names SEGA and GASE/GAZE (Pronounced the same both ways) but I'm not sure how "taken" those names are.
    Last edited by KehmONE; 03-20-2012 at 10:05 AM.

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    just google the names thats the best way to see if their taken

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    @Hick First ones not bad, second is eh.

    Made 2 more slaps


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    the style is good but calm down on all the highlights especially on the 2nd pic it takes away from the letters

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    Digging the first one

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    Quote Originally Posted by cred1384 View Post
    Any tips on making the D in this one look less like an O?
    the d you used on the last page looked nothing like an o. use it. and what youre doing with your throws right now is stupid. youre squeezing the letters too much and, with the sketchy highlights youre using, its all getting difficult to read. also, the leg of your r, the way it curls out at both ends, just doesnt look good.

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    Trying to clean it up / dumb it down. Thanks for the crits fellas.

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    you seem to really like the way your r looks, so i guess i wont restate what ive already said about it. try making the nose (middle bump) of the e larger. if you want, play around with different tops for your letters (curves, squares, everything in between). the ridges you have right now dont look so bad on the d, but it looks odd on the r. oh, and mark the holes in your letters. dots/lines, ya dig?

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    I feel ya , I'd already finished that one before i saw your comment. I always get blinded and want to make the ridges or bumps consistent rather than aesthetic. I'll keep workin with it. Thanks again.

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    Throwie was in color but orange turned to brown with my lame scanner

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    Need to fix the E, majorly.

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    if i were you, i would exaggerate the bump on the side of your s.



    like so






    fresh!



    it would also be worth trying to do something clever with your o. lots of face potential there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by KehmONE View Post


    Need to fix the E, majorly.
    Forgot to ask for crits.

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    KehmONE


    - the left side of your g could stand to kick out more, i think. add a little flavor to go with the lip you have going. it also a bit smaller than the rest of the letters, which never really looks good for the first letter.

    - the a looks boring. switch it up a bit?

    - see about removing the negative space between the bottom of the s and the a.

    - your e isnt as bad as you had it out to be. granted, it does looks like it has a stupid grin on its face.

    - it looks like all of your letters are wider up top than they are down bottom. if thats something youre doing intentionally and you like it, go for it. if not, i suggest fixing it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ChadWarden View Post
    KehmONE


    - the left side of your g could stand to kick out more, i think. add a little flavor to go with the lip you have going. it also a bit smaller than the rest of the letters, which never really looks good for the first letter.

    - the a looks boring. switch it up a bit?

    - see about removing the negative space between the bottom of the s and the a.

    - your e isnt as bad as you had it out to be. granted, it does looks like it has a stupid grin on its face.

    - it looks like all of your letters are wider up top than they are down bottom. if thats something youre doing intentionally and you like it, go for it. if not, i suggest fixing it.
    I see what you mean about the G, it's actually the same size but it's a webcam picture so the perspective is slightly off from the way I was holding it.

    I liked my 'a' I thought it was simple, but fit the style of the rest of the throw.

    Not sure what I would do about the negative space.

    They're intentionally wider at the top yeah.


 

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