Throwies

[AstoK]

day-time bombing, not such a quiet area, had to run a little bit.

[STOXY]

crits?

[AXILY]

Thinking of putting it to a wall but it will be to hard for a toy like me :P

[Mori]

Fuck you^

[Norfsuthr]

^nice A

Axily you need to just delete your account and give up. I can tell just from that you're never gonna be shit.

[ven0m]

hsss... thats gonna leave a sting

[saveme]

quick shit i drew love to here coments good n bad thats what makes us better



sry it posted so many

[Mori]

bottom page bump

[snoketg]

quick new throwie, can i get some crits?

make the o wider and that will look fresh as fuck mori

and a little taller

[kwu]

Pretty sure that's an a
and rev, the over lap should flow throughout so don't have the left leg over lap the right leg in the r. The e needs work, and the v is alright I can dig it

[snoketg]

ok, make that A bigger then.

[AstoK]

crits on this?


mori your throw is fresh,
axily; give up
save me; no one can save you..
rev; getting there, unless you think you write revok, then your a gug and you can die..

[Phillip McDougall]

stock caps...

[dreg]

I like everything but the R ^ Those are some wide stocks!



Crits please, Trying to just go more simple.

E: gah, fuck this, it keeps loading in upside down.

[Norfsuthr]

No^.

That R is dope. Only thing that dont give me a boner is the S.

[Phillip McDougall]

Yeah it's not my usual R... I don't know where the fuck this one came from. and the chrome was a can of Rusto Bright Coat, with a female valve and an "easy spray" nozzle for wider coverage... it's for sheet metal and shit. And I didn't have any other female caps haha. definitely need to invest in a cap adapter, all Rusto is female valve now...

[verty]

That 3rd one looks ok, not a throw but its good compared to your other shit. On the top 2 you're doing bubble styles for the ER but bar type ish on the VT, conform that shit. Look at some throws on flickr or something, usually they're 1 or 2 lines per letter, just go with that for now and keep the whole thing simple. btw I've only ever seen 3 guys who can rock a shine in their throws and not look like trash.

That 3rd one looks ok, not a throw but its good compared to your other shit. On the top 2 you're doing bubble styles for the ER but bar type ish on the VT, conform that shit. Look at some throws on flickr or something, usually they're 1 or 2 lines per letter, just go with that for now and keep the whole thing simple. btw I've only ever seen 3 guys who can rock a shine in their throws and not look like trash.

Thanks for the feedback guys, much.

Anyway im still keeping at it, looking at heaps of Pieces on here and everywhere else.

Latest attached, I think personally im getting better but still have a long way to go...
thoughts and suggestions?

[ven0m]

so?

[Phillip McDougall]

NO


is the part that needs to be fixed most, the V is too lopsided, the E is too hidden, and the extended part of the M should be a little more even. the top of the N is too small and the O is HUGE.

[Norfsuthr]

If you're stickin with the n-o connect be a little fancy/clever about it. It's boring *****.

still in the prototype phase here but lemme know what you think..

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