lol wsgud FV
Yeah I used to write King for about a month, didnt really throw it up anywhere. I read a lot of Stephen King, in no way do I think I'm a real "king" haha. But yeah I know of Taki 183. I just write Tak now cause he's a character in a Stephen King book.
Is there another KING I dont know about? I know its a toolish/toyish thing to write but I never heard of another KING. And idgaf if it sounds toyish, I used to write a bunch of random shit like "19" and "All Hail The Crimson King", both form The Dark Tower book series, so it just kind of fit.
Last edited by ven0m; 04-21-2012 at 05:09 PM.
That D and extension on the M are a no-go.
King or Tak. I haven't heard of an artist who Calls himself king, at least no one that wasn't a toy. Anyways ur shit is clean so props to that. On the king ur g is too small and doesn't fit well style wise. The Tak your K doesn't fit. Just too skinny. Top of the T looks bored also.
Tasty the oneliner is dope. Like how u did the LD. Couldn't shaped the L a bit more
Dank looks good, i would do something siff with the botto
Of the E, I'm not feeling the D. The M also seems a lil big
some of my first throw ups, just did some today and will try to get some pics tomorrow
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Just finished this one, came out all right except for the e, in my opinion my e has been making me lose my flow. Might respell my name a bit.
Last edited by Spy10327; 04-21-2012 at 10:58 PM.
If you seriously want to get better you got a lot of work ahead. First off, don't waste your time coloring in anything for a while. Work on making your letter look better. Coloring is a waste of time and you should have got enough practice when you were a kid. Do simples. Practice keyboard style letters... It's harder than you would think. Try writting your name as simple as possable and maybe adding a shadow. If you. An do that and make all the letters the same size and paportions then your on track. If you can't do that, then you better pracites lots.
The only way to get better is to fill pages and pages of your name over and over. Insted of coloring maybe just outline it with marker. Once you have a basic start it will be easier to build your own style that looks dope, good luck.
Tried to keep it simple and straight letter. Thoughts?
A solid fill would be cool. lol. Relax when you paint, if you have enough time to do that random line fill, you can do a solid fill.
Jes - try finding some chill walls. you look rushed
seldom - try tweaking your D a bit. and if you make the extension on the M bigger it might flow better
Last edited by killroywashere; 04-22-2012 at 03:40 AM.
♠♠♠thats good ??dath?..sonar-meka are any of these names taken before i upload my pics i wanna no if there is no bite intended.
I only color in my better pieces and throwies in my blackbook and I'm only uploading them so that I don't upload too much wack shit ya know? Here's my most recent throwie.
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Slight change in spelling dropped the e and added that 'i'. My 'f' is a too fat and my t doesn't flow yet i'll fix that after i get my i to flow. Tips/crits?
Simple it down Fait a throw up meant to be fast some u can do under 1min or 2
Last edited by Axil; 04-22-2012 at 04:46 PM.
^^^ dont give crits until you have an idea of what your doing yourself.... go here
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that drop shade is awkward as fuck