yo i was just wondering how this competions work i'm new in bombing science
FONK YOU...GS
gov that throws looking pretty chill
mrkurto i think you need some work with sketching, and a little with painting
any crits?
617hit me up
Lol don't judge my handstyle on that wack pen scrawl I randomly put inside the "M" :P; crits? I have yet to venture outside of my blackbook:
First post here. I just got back into writing from a 3 year break. I sketched a quick outline. Nothing special.
Start hating.
work on that i..ALOT
scratch lookin safe, maybe a tad bit wider and make the first letter a bit more legible?
meta dont make your E drip down like that
vice yeh, work on your I
(by the way this was a dissed legal wall and i know the people who did the pieces.)
Originally Posted by exitus
my stuff
Im just startin out in dis.crit would help a bit
Last edited by Jayz146; 10-07-2008 at 05:42 PM. Reason: To dull
yes u r
crits would be nice...
hold my ak like a spraycan and spray you like a fat cap.
Soup man, I'm sorry I cant do your name to save my life. Sorry lol.
^ haha
" Live every day like it's your last,one day your going to be right. "
London. Uk.
^^ XD
Quickie PEEG throws.
Gov- I think it'd look better if you kept the arrows out of the O and the V
Nine- I dig 'em, the P and G just seem a little off to me.
Peeg:
fix your G's. only letter i'm not feelin
do i see the recent cile throwie battle influence/bite? look at the albert fish vs cile battle in the battle thread if you dont know what im on about, if so don't bite, if not, i was going to give some crits but then i realised you didnt so crit next time
crits would be nice...
sa- looks ok, basic letters, work from that and also your might be a bit plain, try to do it so you can see the whole letters, or at least the top
peeg- i do agree about the g, try both upper and lower case and also try to keep the vertical bar of the p more pronounced, could be confused for an e, e's are plain nothing good with em, nothing bad and also their looks like you tried to put drop shadow in the holes but theirs none on the actual letters, just realized you didnt quit but im not gonna delete all this so crit next time
toy- new to graff thread and bars for simples, simple bubble letters for throwies and make sure you crit others if you want crits
nesk- think that says as, work on your control alot, you got alot of drips and some not very clean lines, also if it was a legal wall you should've done a whole throwie, the s doesnt seem to bad and i like the fact that the tops are kinda the same but backwards, i dont like that bump on the bottom of the a, try and rework that, personally i wouldnt do crosses on letters, experiment with lines or circles or ovals but that personal preference, get some good can control down and that could be pretty nice
edit: also anyone up for a throwie exchange? trying out new style
Last edited by letsgobombin; 10-09-2008 at 10:38 AM.
The best thing anyone can do style-wise on here is to leave.
how can i possibly give crits after letsgobombin?? he covered the whole page.
tono - i like that throw but your f is kinda small
disregard my retarded L i dont what happen when i was drawin that. i finally found a K too. crits??
Last edited by LeaksOne; 10-09-2008 at 05:48 PM.
flare - that looks mad dope but DONT BITE!! and your 3d is messed...
peeg - really smooth except for the g
nesk1 - nice two-letter but work on not dripping and get some better paint maybe? work on your 3d a lil as well.
my two-letter.....crits..
Late nights, early mornings.
my friend showed his throwie alphabet to me from his bb and i bit his f but i guess he got it from that battle? idkits supposed to be shadow... and your 2 letter is ill. nice and simple. looks like you write scrap?flare - that looks mad dope but DONT BITE!! and your 3d is messed...
letsgobombing. ill do an exhange with you? do you write your username?
Last edited by TONO; 10-09-2008 at 05:24 PM.
hold my ak like a spraycan and spray you like a fat cap.
not feelin the r...
crits would be nice...
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