you've been around long enough to know thats not good. scrap it and try again.
Not feeling the lines, I'm working with 2 markers at work though so I had to try something. How bout things I'm doing well?
Prose my dude, make sure you're not lingering on the paper and that the side of your hand is resting on the surface your drawing on. Loosen up and let your hand flow and you won't have shaky letters. And try out different types of holes for your letters, i'm not feeling the dots.
Church, there's no letter definition whatsoever. your lines are shaky, the 3D is off, the letters and different parts of the letters are all different widths, there's no flow to the letters. instead of trying to do anything with any sort of flair, do a load of keyboard, straight letters. there's a new to graffiti thread here, go there and read it all! i've said it so many times on here and i'm sure people will agree, a well executed simple piece with keyboard letters, all bars the same width, is so SOO much better than a shit piece like that.
read that thread, do some simples then post them up and we'll take it from there. but from now on, stop with that pointy square mess.
Prose and Sen; try and work on your lines. it sounds odd but don't take so much time trying to make them perfect. speed up your movements and you'll notice they smooth themselves out.
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most definatly thank you guys i also natrualy have very very shaky hands so at times it gets hard
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goph- im diggin the first goph and the shemp man thanks
gat- dude i love your throws that n is dopesauce
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My first throwie...I dont thinkn its that bad but is there anything i should touch up or improve on in the future?
your a's are the only good letter and they look a lot like a's ive seen before but i cant remember whose
@Gatsio : do you write in nj, cause i think i caught some of your tags. Btw the E needs a little work, diggin the rest though
mido where the hell is my pack
no need to say that im bad u said that already 10 times xd
Some quick throwies, feel free to rip em apart.
@Mcong - In the first pick the G will be straight if you take out all thoughs other little line that are suppose to be highlights. The N in the first one is better than all the other N's, so work on that a little more. The O is straight, you cant really do to much with an o. But The M and deff the C needs work. The C is kinda cool, but it does not flow with the other letters and the M i just dont like at all. Just keep practicing and sketching, and clean up your letters
Heading in the right direction? i must have been doing something wrong because my "E" looked like a "G" ahahaha
Any other crits are welcomed!
Last edited by mathew1232; 08-04-2012 at 07:58 PM.