For fuck sake... Yes thats toy. Theres no proper structure to the letters, the 3D is off, theres parts of the 3D missing, that face in the what looks like it could be a H is awful and unnecessary. All the little drawings around it are bad, the "buds inc" is all out of proportion. There is nothing right about this.. Go to the "new to graffiti" thread and start again.
That corfu looks all right. The C doesn't look right to me and it looks a bit rigid. The top half has a nice flow though. Not bad
Last edited by TBS; 08-22-2012 at 07:57 AM.
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that's buds ind. If you don't know what toy means.... google it, ask some one, do some research.... learn some history. for real... TBS Can I get some crits from you on that Corfu?
Yeah, as i said the top of it has some decent rhythm and flow but the bottom half seems quite rigid. The problem with the C is that line in the middle comes down too far. The O and U aren't too bad but personally i'd bring it up a bit. The R looks a bit like an A, again i would move that line in the middle over a bit, just to make it look more like an R. And with the U, just make that last little bit a bit thicker. Other than that its not a bad attempt.
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Thanks!
peter looks good, only thing i can say is the C looks a little bit like a G and with ur U maybe just have it a straight line coming downt he middle or somthing..looking good though dude
intout go more simple and like the others said check out the new to graff thread
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Yeahhhh.. you should just kill yourself if you've been writing since 07 and thats all you can do.Originally Posted by intaout
Last edited by Norfsuthr; 08-23-2012 at 12:11 AM.
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word i wasnt baked enough toys are asshole faggots got you
i like the letters ecepts the T in WETM is getting a bit wonky.
hipe that throw is dope i dig it
werm i like those 2 throws, i dont really like that little swirl into the R though but thats just me
i think we should could toys GROMs like grominate from calgary expet just gromstoy sounds odd to me.
Bumpin for crits and its werm not wetm
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maybe try messing around with a capital R or somshit, those E's r dope
in the bottom pic the right side of your W kinda looks like a lower case R cuz ur line came in close to the middle of the W...if u look at it in that way, could be a cool lower case R to use
kaze said it all ^^
hopin to get some feedback
Last edited by SneeZ; 08-23-2012 at 06:38 AM.
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sneez - i like your letters and style but what do you write?
damn those r dope sneez, realy digging the trask and akers in the second last picture..black and chrome one is nice 2
quickie its gettin better, E there looks off, the bottom inside part of it is to fat if u get wat im saying, just keep working at it
I get you, any advice?
maybe somthing like this..the E's that r unfinished at the back just imagine your K being there lol
just 2 give u some ideas
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