Graffiti Poetry

**DEVILEFK** · 05-13-2005 12:23 AM

my name is ateejay i need a bj

**Art Vandilay** · 05-14-2005 02:50 AM

the first post seemed rather poetic.

in stark contrast to your rhyming faggotry.

**GeSuS_KRiST** · 05-14-2005 02:59 AM

if your talkin to me, the only thing i have posted in here is that nothing in here is poetic... nor am i a poet or a emcee

**Art Vandilay** · 05-14-2005 03:01 AM

the world doesnt revolve around you jesus.

no one was talking to you.

**GeSuS_KRiST** · 05-14-2005 03:04 AM

well considering u responded to my post about how theres nothign poetic in here i figured rest would be about me

**Art Vandilay** · 05-14-2005 03:15 AM

yeah well, you win some you loose some

**GeSuS_KRiST** · 05-14-2005 03:16 AM

you make no sence

**Art Vandilay** · 05-14-2005 03:22 AM

Originally posted by bustoleum@May 12 2005, 01:26 PM
the endless cycle, up all night,
writing my name, attempt insight,
longing in darkness, and blushing in light,
searching for something, to make something right.
anxious, creative, the feeling is trife.
intoxication is mechanic, cause im up all night.

blown by the wind, through-out my whole life
with nothing but dakness, to make the day light.
searching fo something, to make nothing right.

words, endlessly spoken, but they dont mean shit.
without darkness and light,
to make meaning of it.

Lost and broken, words that are spoken
to you and to me , the human condition,
words have no value, without being written.

The things that we miss, the people forgotten,
like squirells in a tree, whos trunk has gone rotten.
waiting to plummet, hopping your branch breaks last,
so you can watch those above you, fall to the grass.
the jaded focus, to what? were not sure.
cause we're up all night , and there is no cure.

i like that poem. it makes me think of insomnia. if there is ever a title it should be called insomnia.

**snow2skate** · 05-17-2005 01:18 AM

One day i saw a cow, its was a mean looking cow, oh how i despised that cow, so i pushed it over and that is how, that mean old cow,had died giving birth to a sow... wtf is that... its name1's mom...wtf am i on...sorry crack...fuk off..what? dont mind me im just randomly randoming to bump this thread up..................

**das1** · 10-02-2005 12:13 AM

THE ONLY HOPE WE HAVE IS THE ART WE LOVE

GRAFFITI IS NOT VANDILSIM

IT IS NOT JUST SOME WRITTING ON A WALL

GRAFFITI IS A STATE OF MIND

NOT JUST A HOBY

BUT A JOB

A MISSION

TO STATE YOUR NAME

TO CLAIM THE FAME

OF A NAME

**>SM!7K<** · 10-02-2005 09:23 AM

ITS ALL FOR THE BETTER
MY TWISTING OF LETTERS
LEAVING PUSSIES AND TOYS
JUST A LITTLE BIT WETTER
CANT STOP TILL IM VET
BEST FRIEND ALPHABET
HOW SELFISH I AM
FOR ME TO FORGET
THESE PIECES CONCIEVED
FOR TOYS TO BELIEVE
AFTER BITING A STYLE
BANNER RED'S ALL THAT BLEEDS
A HARBOR BLUE ADDICT
A KRYLON FANATIC
YOUR SHIFTING TO 2ND
IM STILL AUTOMATIC
SO QUIT HESITATING
YOUR COLORS KEEP FADING
HOES LOOK AT MY SKETCHES
WHILE THIER MASTURBATING
AND I WONT SAY IT TWICE
I'LL PAY THE DAMN PRICE
FOR A DATE WITH THE CITY
A CAN MY DEVICE

PeacE
..D

h34r: C..

**ACTION NEWS...** · 10-02-2005 09:47 AM

TYPING IN CAPS MAKES YOU GANGSTA
YOU KNOW YOUR GOOD AT GRAFF
IF YOU TYPE IN CAPS

**Havoc411** · 10-02-2005 11:22 AM

paint paint i like paint
paint paint kick you in the taint
paint paint it smells a bit funny
paint paint the glossy kind is kinda runny

**! PrOPeRr ! .aOk.cRu.** · 10-02-2005 01:24 PM

Originally posted by runci@May 12 2005, 01:46 PM
there was a man from china,
who was a graffiti writa,
he lsipped on a rock and chopped off his cock,
an now hes got a vagina..

you stole that from me.

**pSYKAOz** · 10-03-2005 03:59 AM

I liked the last paragraph of the first post. It's intresting. I suggest you try abit less to rhyme the same three words (night,light,right) and rework the first paragraphs.

Poems don't even have to rhyme.

Now I wish Meekus would post something. hehe