I wasn't being negative? I was being constructive.
because you're trying bubble, but they end up looking too blocky. You need to either go blocks, or use circles as a reference for your bubble style.
I said to try a blocky style, because you were already leaning in that direction.
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
hmm well so all the rounded into blockish things?
...sorry, what do you mean?
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
and bump, because there were a bunch of posts that took up too much space.Originally Posted by CrustOner
A few sketches for talk?
I'm waiting on some good markers, either Copics or Prismas, to do the color.
Crits? I'm sure I have some overdue?
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
so like the bottom of my s make it blocky and the rest of the round sides?
I know you said leave out the cans, but i think it looks best like this, i was thinking of putting the 3d upwards, but hey, who cares? Makes it look less bland with the cans.
Crust:
I like the top one and the bottom one, not much to say really, part from try filling.
Last edited by Tez-Graf; 05-21-2009 at 03:16 AM.
Tez- Your E is out of place. Try making it into more of a throw style letter. Try a lowercase E.
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sum sketches
Cow Kru Siroki Brijeg
Welcome to the Balkan
DO SIMPLE BAR LETTERS ^ SIMPLES!!!
yeah the E is covering the R but whatever. IM FUCKING DONE!!!!!!11
Thanks jackie. I was thinking of doing lowercase e... but people told me to stick with keyboard letters, i think i'll go back to lowercase, i preffered it more anyways, much more simpler.
New letter styles. Any ideas for the t??
Last edited by Tez-Graf; 05-21-2009 at 07:22 AM.
Bump.
And Sin, I still don't understand why you always post, ask for crits, then when you get them whine about it. People saying positive things about your work doesn't make you get better. If you want people to give you advice, take it.
that crust oner handy is dope i like the pieces too
eskimo.i would connect the b on the botom personally.instead of having it swilr over like that.he rest of the leters are dope.
syrup in my cup maayne hold up.]
bump those fills[IMG]
sum sketches
but i think eskimos right
you should try them fills on some simpler shit
just add your style to the simpleness so it doesnt look generic
420 sketch and a exchange i did with smooth nuts
i know i should take my own advice and go simpler but ehh im a hypocrite
Last edited by FuckTheFame; 05-21-2009 at 05:12 PM.
heres my contest entry give me some crits so when the next contest comes around ill be rdy
used a basic throw up and knuckles this time crits
your fills are allright but this looks like weakoner
reny that carac is deaaup but the throw not
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