youll get the hang of it.but next time try to be cleaner with your line work homie.
Dude, you will probably never see clean sketches from me.
I could be in this game for like 15 years, structure out the fucking ass,
can control compared to no other,
but I'd still have shit sketches.
They're just ideas for shit to put on walls,
I could give a fuck less if they are clean or not.
Not trying to be a dick or anything, just doin' me.
on another note,
fuuuuuck a dying orange marker
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Last edited by BigBlueViolence; 05-23-2009 at 02:34 PM.
Hey guy's I'm new here, just looking for some feedback on some black book work I did. I am looking for friendly constructive feedback. Please, if you have no constructive feedback or friendly constructive feedback do not say anything. I am not one to make fun of or diss the shit out of your piece so I can only ask, please refrain from doing it to me. That's just what I am asking from you guys and gals. I don't want to come off as a stick in the mud. Anyway enough talk...here you go!
The one's posted first are the more recent ones. The last ones are older ones.
Last edited by Jestur; 05-23-2009 at 05:20 PM.
knox - yah, definately develop your letters first, before intense 3-D. will be ill tho
jest - looks good, maybe less cracks tho lol
went thickerrr..
crits?
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Comments?
crits
"take a walk with me, we going all city, black hat, gloves, flat black's all you need, Krylon, Rusto, a pilot, a silver touch tone, my name is famous, my face is unknown."
rusk- it would look hella better in my opinion if you lost those loopy things on your letters...
rusk - i agree, if you just made them straight ending its would be sweet. nice simple style!!
mr.daze - i don'd like the bars you decided to make you letters out of. They look weird and pregnant. And no one likes abortions.
takeout- nice bomb....wrong forum maybeeh?
Last edited by Emediation; 05-24-2009 at 12:02 AM.
crits??
Only been writing for about 3months no artistic background. so crits?
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Last edited by Bome.nza; 05-24-2009 at 12:44 AM.
Lols at the fat bitchhhhhHH
and new to graff thread
JESTUR really nice man
uhh
Jest keep working on simple thats what you need now mostly
work on proportions because you leak them.take for example you T in the first one.
Neaz keep working some mistakes with proportions.
Bome...i didnt wanted to see the body graff shit...
anways work basic on simple just simple.
Last edited by nuce4; 05-24-2009 at 02:09 AM.
bomb ummm wow uhh if u dont have any artistic back ground or artistic bone in ur body then i dont think graff is for u... but congrats on leting someTHING? let u right on it
Didn't know where to put this up.But a new character based off this
crits?
"my blackbo0k is like my bitch,cause everybody tryna get up in it"
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