Blackbooks

[Emediation]

came - that looks so dope dude.
I'd love to see a complete piece from you!

[ReKoNe~!]

eskimo ur shit looks clean but it all looks the same haha

[Takeout]

Eskimo - Your pieces are lookin' incrdible. Keep it up.
Jema - I feel like the MA in the first piece are a bit too big. But overall it's lookin' good.
Bome - No need to call anyone a douche. Just work on your bars and keeping proportions.

As for me.I'm hoping these proportions are better than the last few. Crits?

["Sin"]

ok im not done i just kinda stared over. working on letter structure and proportions. AND BARS!!! like i said not done with this... but what ya think

[Deck]

When we said start over it also included your name.

[Emediation]

Sin - getting better dude, but your bars are different sizes, try to keep the same direction bars, the same size.
noir - also looking much better

[Fury]

Sin - Keep bars the same size.
Noir - I really don't like the negative space on the I, but I'm not sure how you can change that.
Cyto - How can I make it better? Try adding some 3D to that, I wanna see how it turns out

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

do straight letters and forget about making everything jagged and wobbly

[true Zen]

Takeout: I hate to say it, because you are working at it, but those proportions still look off (to me...and I'm no expert of course) Horizontally the R looks a lot skinnier than everything, and the I a lot fatter.

["Sin"]

so all the bars should be about the same size?
but thanks

[provinT13]

I recently started, but I'm working on it. Let me know what you think.



Edit: I'm using Sharpies right now, cause they seem to do alright, and they're cheap. But if anyone has suggestions for something that'd work better, I'm definitely open to hearing them.

Got your pm man, sent one back, hopefully you see this because I haven't been on here in a month or so. Go simple!!!

[Takeout]

Lines are shaky, but I tried to work on the negative space and the R.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

[Fury]

^ Take out the negative space on the N.
Noir - Fix the O hole. R is a little bit taller than it too.

[..romero..]

do you understand what negative space means???

[sketch_three]

yea the only negative space is between the r and t

[aciddemos]

didnt know for the longest fucking time that they had forums on this site...
anyway heres my shit
DEK 2 FYC




more soon dont feel like taking more pictures of my book today haha

[Jakeboy]

Noir - Your bar's lines are a bit shaky. Try to make bars same width and straight.
Sin- That is a good start. Your S looks a bit weird though and looks more 5 than S to me. Keep working on with bars and next time take out the dead space between letters.
Accidemos - Looks ill. I'm really feelin that character. Reminds me of one shirt in threadless.

Something I made a while ago:

And something I did today:

[ESKiMO2]

Despite for being a douche, the shit looks dope

I forgive you for being a douche.
Remember when I owned your girl, owned you with my girl, then owned you with letters?
Good times... good times...

[KRE1]

Zing !