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    do straight letters and forget about making everything jagged and wobbly

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    Takeout: I hate to say it, because you are working at it, but those proportions still look off (to me...and I'm no expert of course) Horizontally the R looks a lot skinnier than everything, and the I a lot fatter.

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    so all the bars should be about the same size?
    but thanks

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jonni Trikk View Post
    I recently started, but I'm working on it. Let me know what you think.



    Edit: I'm using Sharpies right now, cause they seem to do alright, and they're cheap. But if anyone has suggestions for something that'd work better, I'm definitely open to hearing them.
    Got your pm man, sent one back, hopefully you see this because I haven't been on here in a month or so. Go simple!!!

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    Lines are shaky, but I tried to work on the negative space and the R.


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    ^ Take out the negative space on the N.
    Noir - Fix the O hole. R is a little bit taller than it too.
    Last edited by Fury; 05-28-2009 at 02:13 AM.

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    do you understand what negative space means???
    Quote Originally Posted by ESKiMO2 View Post
    Romero... he speaks the truth.

    syrup in my cup maayne hold up.]

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    yea the only negative space is between the r and t

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    didnt know for the longest fucking time that they had forums on this site...
    anyway heres my shit
    DEK 2 FYC




    more soon dont feel like taking more pictures of my book today haha

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    Noir - Your bar's lines are a bit shaky. Try to make bars same width and straight.
    Sin- That is a good start. Your S looks a bit weird though and looks more 5 than S to me. Keep working on with bars and next time take out the dead space between letters.
    Accidemos - Looks ill. I'm really feelin that character. Reminds me of one shirt in threadless.

    Something I made a while ago:

    And something I did today:
    Last edited by Jakeboy; 05-28-2009 at 01:46 PM. Reason: Fixing

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bome.nza View Post
    Despite for being a douche, the shit looks dope
    I forgive you for being a douche.
    Remember when I owned your girl, owned you with my girl, then owned you with letters?
    Good times... good times...

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    Zing !

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    bump from last page. Crits?

    Quote Originally Posted by Jakeboy View Post
    Noir - Your bar's lines are a bit shaky. Try to make bars same width and straight.
    Sin- That is a good start. Your S looks a bit weird though and looks more 5 than S to me. Keep working on with bars and next time take out the dead space between letters.
    Accidemos - Looks ill. I'm really feelin that character. Reminds me of one shirt in threadless.

    Something I made a while ago:

    And something I did today:

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    Quote Originally Posted by ESKiMO2 View Post
    I forgive you for being a douche.
    Remember when I owned your girl, owned you with my girl, then owned you with letters?
    Good times... good times...
    lolss

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    acid - looks sick bro
    peck - nice n dope, i wouldn't waste your black on such an intense background tho lol.

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    i know the joke is over, but i found bome trying to hide his gf's gut on 12oz lol he shure learned his lesson

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    Yeah, I thought that too but yellow just looks better with black background.

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    hey sin is takein by a guy in my citywhere do you live?
    does anyone remember those mistic drinks? the ones that were like half sobe half kool aid? well i just found out that the store near my school has them, and drinking one is like getting 1000 bjs while riding on a rolllercoaster. so good

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    hey bome, im just curious why didnt you even say anything bout people making fun of your girl. even if it was maaad funny lmfao!..but idk man stand up for her.

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    i lold so much at the whale pic hahahahahaha


 

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