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    i dont hate toys i am one fuck but people who constantly ask you where your paint store is
    SLIPYx3 MEGEEE

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    Quote Originally Posted by klic View Post
    for viruz


    shitty throw, for bbv


    arsen - dont do x's for holes. do it slower, i can tell you went through it too fast by the little flicks at the end of your lines. lose the faces in your letters, dont worry about 3D/shadow for now. keep your letters proportional, the right leg on your A is a lot bigger than the left. another thing your doing is covering one leg with the other. take your A for example. the right leg cuts off the left when it comes up. you should make them both come up and merge together if you know what i mean. same thing with your N. keep practicing, fill up pages full of hollow throws, and dont rush it as much
    Thanks haha. I already knew my proportions were off and stuff, but I was trying to do a throwie, instead of just a simple. I get what you mean about the merging part.
    Do you mean like this?


    Crits!
    99% - I don't really like the fill, but the rest looks good.
    ding1 - Work on the proportions of the K, and I'm not digging the R that much.
    Rek - I like the style, but work on proportions and the 3D.
    Janek - I like Viruz's a lot, and BBV's looks okay. The only recommendation I have is lose the line for Viruz's.
    Last edited by Fury; 08-13-2009 at 12:40 AM.
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    <<<Sometimes it sucks being the early bird...

    ..... Rocking wtf snake....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fury View Post
    Thanks haha. I already knew my proportions were off and stuff, but I was trying to do a throwie, instead of just a simple. I get what you mean about the merging part.
    Do you mean like this?


    Crits!
    99% - I don't really like the fill, but the rest looks good.
    ding1 - Work on the proportions of the K, and I'm not digging the R that much.
    Rek - I like the style, but work on proportions and the 3D.
    Janek - I like Viruz's a lot, and BBV's looks okay. The only recommendation I have is lose the line for Viruz's.
    your A looks good but your still doing it on your N, the right leg is cutting over the middle

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    some shit exchange for friend
    KEAZ YRC
    i know my coloring sucks >>

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    Quote Originally Posted by nuce4 View Post
    some shit exchange for friend
    KEAZ YRC
    i know my coloring sucks >>
    damnnn kid that shit is sexy
    SLIPYx3 MEGEEE

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    the piece is nice, but your hand needs some serious work

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    Slipy- Real nice color selection, only crits i have is to make the left leg of the A visible cause it kinda looks like a Y, Also on the Z i would make the top indent deeper.Nice work.
    Arsen-I dont really do throws so i cant crit to much, but keep all the letters the same size because you have it progressively getting smaller towards the end fix that and it will look loads better.
    Murphy's Law-I really like the karaks if you started doing them with colors instead of just black and white i think you'd be set.

    I havent been on here in awhile just been sticking to the blackbook lately, this piece here was inspired by my first dmt trip where I experienced visuals like these letters reaching across the night sky. plz crit.
    Edit: and here is a karak that the dose from phish gave me.
    Last edited by Amends_Ego; 08-13-2009 at 01:24 PM.
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    workin on a simple

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    Quote Originally Posted by Murphy's law View Post
    <<<Sometimes it sucks being the early bird...

    ..... Rocking wtf snake....
    that's sick.
    Yo, Fuck yo IPOD!

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    Thanks, the more bored i am the more fucked up stuff i do.....

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    Amends, simplify and define. The double thick is nice, but I think you should have a more defined outline.

    Emek, if you're gonna rock the same letter twice and have it be real similar, make sure it's really similar. Otherwise, good start.


    All that hipster steeze talk got me motivated a lil. My hands are still being quite unsteady, hopefully I'll have some cleaner stuff on the weekend and I'm bunned.

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    Dawg,
    we gotta do an exchange.

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    Simple calligraphy style burner.

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    c and m are good, a's decent, e ruins it. keep working with it though

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    Quote Originally Posted by klic View Post
    c and m are good, a's decent, e ruins it. keep working with it though
    Ya the e is pretty weak. I was sitting in a car trying to draw from memory and couldnt remember what callig e's look like.

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    Quote Originally Posted by milk boxx View Post


    workin on a simple
    I dont like how the "M" spaces everything out. But thats just me.

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    everything on this page made me take a pen to my eyes....
    "Yo there is no escape!No recourse when I resort to forces of sorts reserved for bloodsports"
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    stuck is my hero.

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    crits?

    emek im liking that style

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stuck View Post
    everything on this page made me take a pen to my eyes....
    Thanks homie! Glad my ish helped in your sight-loss.


 

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