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    No feelings involved at all homey...just questions and a desire to get better. And like I said if I'm a smartass my bad. We are who we are. I jus wanna be better dude and underneath it all deres still respect. I'm off to try some shit. Thanks for the replies
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    Quote Originally Posted by slipyslipyslipymegeee View Post
    thats how you will be treated untill you make progresion

    lol...what the fuck is this? graffiti boot camp?
    chill the fuck out everyone.

    the whole "i hate toys" mentality is played out.
    if you're gonna hate toys, hate toys. don't hate and then try to give advice.
    pick one.
    i don't want a signature.

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    Predator, you gotta put in some more work. Graffiti illustrator or wherever you're checking will only give you one stylo, and the stuff you're adding, takes away from any style it had to begin with. Try different things.


    Stupid hipster styles, fun stuff. Gwaan ditch this S. I also lined the U wrong, Conan got interesting and I stopped paying attention to what I was doing.

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    I think your M is too busy for the other letters.
    I wouldn't put the curve on the top of the Y, either

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    Next run the other letters will have some extensions/busyness, didn't feel like too much in as I wasn't gonna use/waste my good markers on this, but I see what you're saying.

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    i dont hate toys i am one fuck but people who constantly ask you where your paint store is
    SLIPYx3 MEGEEE

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    Quote Originally Posted by klic View Post
    for viruz


    shitty throw, for bbv


    arsen - dont do x's for holes. do it slower, i can tell you went through it too fast by the little flicks at the end of your lines. lose the faces in your letters, dont worry about 3D/shadow for now. keep your letters proportional, the right leg on your A is a lot bigger than the left. another thing your doing is covering one leg with the other. take your A for example. the right leg cuts off the left when it comes up. you should make them both come up and merge together if you know what i mean. same thing with your N. keep practicing, fill up pages full of hollow throws, and dont rush it as much
    Thanks haha. I already knew my proportions were off and stuff, but I was trying to do a throwie, instead of just a simple. I get what you mean about the merging part.
    Do you mean like this?


    Crits!
    99% - I don't really like the fill, but the rest looks good.
    ding1 - Work on the proportions of the K, and I'm not digging the R that much.
    Rek - I like the style, but work on proportions and the 3D.
    Janek - I like Viruz's a lot, and BBV's looks okay. The only recommendation I have is lose the line for Viruz's.
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    <<<Sometimes it sucks being the early bird...

    ..... Rocking wtf snake....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fury View Post
    Thanks haha. I already knew my proportions were off and stuff, but I was trying to do a throwie, instead of just a simple. I get what you mean about the merging part.
    Do you mean like this?


    Crits!
    99% - I don't really like the fill, but the rest looks good.
    ding1 - Work on the proportions of the K, and I'm not digging the R that much.
    Rek - I like the style, but work on proportions and the 3D.
    Janek - I like Viruz's a lot, and BBV's looks okay. The only recommendation I have is lose the line for Viruz's.
    your A looks good but your still doing it on your N, the right leg is cutting over the middle

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    some shit exchange for friend
    KEAZ YRC
    i know my coloring sucks >>

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    Quote Originally Posted by nuce4 View Post
    some shit exchange for friend
    KEAZ YRC
    i know my coloring sucks >>
    damnnn kid that shit is sexy
    SLIPYx3 MEGEEE

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    the piece is nice, but your hand needs some serious work

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    Slipy- Real nice color selection, only crits i have is to make the left leg of the A visible cause it kinda looks like a Y, Also on the Z i would make the top indent deeper.Nice work.
    Arsen-I dont really do throws so i cant crit to much, but keep all the letters the same size because you have it progressively getting smaller towards the end fix that and it will look loads better.
    Murphy's Law-I really like the karaks if you started doing them with colors instead of just black and white i think you'd be set.

    I havent been on here in awhile just been sticking to the blackbook lately, this piece here was inspired by my first dmt trip where I experienced visuals like these letters reaching across the night sky. plz crit.
    Edit: and here is a karak that the dose from phish gave me.
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    workin on a simple

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    Quote Originally Posted by Murphy's law View Post
    <<<Sometimes it sucks being the early bird...

    ..... Rocking wtf snake....
    that's sick.
    Yo, Fuck yo IPOD!

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    Thanks, the more bored i am the more fucked up stuff i do.....

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    Amends, simplify and define. The double thick is nice, but I think you should have a more defined outline.

    Emek, if you're gonna rock the same letter twice and have it be real similar, make sure it's really similar. Otherwise, good start.


    All that hipster steeze talk got me motivated a lil. My hands are still being quite unsteady, hopefully I'll have some cleaner stuff on the weekend and I'm bunned.

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    Dawg,
    we gotta do an exchange.

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    Simple calligraphy style burner.

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    c and m are good, a's decent, e ruins it. keep working with it though


 

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