Blackbooks

[b SQUARED 08]

I already posted this in the characs thread, but here's a sketch I did last night of Deadmau5:

[-sense-]

[weakfingers]

^^ Looks to me that you have to go simpler and keep the same bar width.



E's....... Not my forte'

[massacreman]

this is my suggestion


The upper trow is nice but i dont like faces in throws

[Murphy's law]

To every one, Thanks...

Murphy- that bunny is legit, the axe looks a tad off but no big it's still sick

Yeah it was a last second thing to hide a mistake that i made. But thanks...

[DestroyLA]

[EST2007]

make the Z flow

[MARTYRaz]

^^ Looks to me that you have to go simpler and keep the same bar width.



E's....... Not my forte'

ur throws r killer man...

[La Coka Nostra]

make the Z flow

i'd say make all the other letters flow with the Z.
they're all hurting except that one.
got bars where they don't belong.

don't double up bars in the middle of B's and R's. they combine in the middle to form one.

[Eon 1]

I already posted this in the characs thread, but here's a sketch I did last night of Deadmau5:

This would make a sick ass slap.. you should try to make some slaps like that cause I definatly would wat some of those.

[TastySesamcrew]

Bokz

TFS

[W_G_O_N_E]

[DUNSY]

This would make a sick ass slap.. you should try to make some slaps like that cause I definatly would wat some of those.

me too !

WGONE really nice, awesome coloring
tasty i like your style

[Trestoner707]

tasty - shit'd be crazy on a wall
wgone - your on to something



i know u guys r gonna hate the spade. but crits anyways?

[Murphy's law]

I'm gonna get my buddy to add lettering.... only because i suck at it......

[gumOnShoe]

Bokz

TFS

looks mad fresh, the letters are in check, the color scheme is on point, i like the whole ice cream/ candy vibe you got going, too.

[Shell703]

[PegCityBoy]

b squared - dooooope char like they said throw that on some slaps or it would make a fresh wheatpaste

tasty - /jizzinpants love that steeze you got it on lock

[BlacktodaFuture]

local king, Zeus!

[Save and Kill]

Tasty- those are both hella clean. I like the drips on the bottom, it'd be sick to see those painted

Trestoner- There's just to much going on in that for me. It looks like all the structure is good though

Wgone- that's ill. Im diggin' the middle and the last one. keep it up

Coen- if the bottom of the last three letters are flat, maybe make the bottom of the C flat too? or make the bottoms on the last three letters not flat? just keep working it. The throw is nice, work the handie

Bezr-Your Z is smaller than the rest of your letters. Try making all your letters like your Z and bring the leg of the R up

Murphy- the crink in his tail is the only thing I dont like, the rest of it is legit, I'd like to see stuff you do on a canvas no joke.

Shell- I'm not sure what that is soo um maybe make it look like letters?