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    Patchy!
    i think the problem is there is no consistency in style. the letters dont go together very well, and even the letters them selves are all over the place. Your M is great in my opinion and its because its constant! look at the top left corner of the S, that swirl is kinda useless and takes away from the letter.

    my last little peice of advice is this. like i tell everyone KEEP IT SIMPLE. just for now.

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    Quote Originally Posted by -Empty-Can- View Post

    bump for crits

    VOICE-Do simple letters. Use bars. don't try too hard
    BEAR-no simpler. but... good use of bars
    SLM-It's ok. Lose all of the wack extensions and try to keep all your letters and bars the exact same width for now.


    SHITS DOOOOOPE!
    clean up it, outline it with shit or something cause I already know that'll turn out good.

    It's excellent bro, I wish I could make shit like you, I guess practice makes perfect

    but IMO the S can be much better if you try

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    thanks ShER now thats what i was looking fo

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    Yo Skech battles are back check my sig, or go to the toy call outs. For more info
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    crits?

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    dumb it down a bit but i think that would look nice if it was well painted

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    cleaned up.. a bit

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    Quote Originally Posted by kew1 View Post
    dumb it down a bit but i think that would look nice if it was well painted
    thnks bro n yea i agree it is a bit much lol

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    stot - fix that s and your good bro that looks real nice

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    alec-K's dope but the first curve of the S(top one) is way to far out. bring it in a little bit

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    hey thanks for pointing that out, makes a big difference

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    i havent been on this website in a while used to write gees got cought and then started to write yank stoped changed to eak added a z then started wrighting zeak sounded kindda lame then switched to zuke then i didnt like the k and the e where they where so i switched them around and made zuek some stuff of the old and new
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    Quote Originally Posted by -Empty-Can- View Post

    bump for crits.
    definatly the best i've seen of yours, keep working on it for sure.

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    Quote Originally Posted by B E A R View Post


    Different style - Better?

    crits


    Bear
    maybe to connect your letters more...im just not feeling it whatsoever (but idk ask a really "bombingscience'er")
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    Quote Originally Posted by RemoZ View Post
    Gum- The I is pretty wack all around the other letters look good, would look nicer with a shadow.

    Bear-Sketch for a long time.

    Likely going to piece this the weekend after next(I'll be in Florida this weekend)

    I plan to do a Dark brown to light brown fade from the bottom to top with maybe around 4 different shades, Black outline, Kinda light blue double outline.

    I know the E needs some work and my shadow game is whack. But I really like the WOR

    any crits?


    Bump for crits

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    zuek those simples are dope. and that N on the yank is fresh as hell man. good work.
    been playing around tryna find a new name for quite a while now. i'm think im liking this name..
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    dimes bag. ahahha
    anyways pretty sick. imo the bottom M could use alittle more work. keep up the good work

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    dimes looking dope


 

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