Blackbooks

**<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>** · 03-09-2010 04:35 PM

Idk patchy I think your alryte just need some time and work and you when you develope your own unique style that's when they'll get off your nuttz ha

Bear ...I like it, I like the A more than anything but I feel like I've seen it b4, anywho your
B looks like an A but just with a bar pullin back from the second leg but its much better

Stotr- that O catches my eye n the rest is pretty good too

And yes bump alec's statement

**SHER_WON_WTS** · 03-09-2010 04:43 PM

Patchy!
i think the problem is there is no consistency in style. the letters dont go together very well, and even the letters them selves are all over the place. Your M is great in my opinion and its because its constant! look at the top left corner of the S, that swirl is kinda useless and takes away from the letter.

my last little peice of advice is this. like i tell everyone KEEP IT SIMPLE. just for now.

**flask1995** · 03-09-2010 04:47 PM

Originally Posted by -Empty-Can-

bump for crits

VOICE-Do simple letters. Use bars. don't try too hard
BEAR-no simpler. but... good use of bars
SLM-It's ok. Lose all of the wack extensions and try to keep all your letters and bars the exact same width for now.

SHITS DOOOOOPE!
clean up it, outline it with shit or something cause I already know that'll turn out good.

It's excellent bro, I wish I could make shit like you, I guess practice makes perfect

but IMO the S can be much better if you try

**Patchy** · 03-09-2010 04:48 PM

thanks ShER now thats what i was looking fo

**(SoS)Viruz** · 03-09-2010 05:41 PM

Yo Skech battles are back check my sig, or go to the toy call outs. For more info

**RADAWG** · 03-09-2010 05:45 PM

**CrustOner** · 03-09-2010 06:25 PM

Getting better, stot.

**MASE P_2s** · 03-09-2010 07:40 PM

crits?

**kew1** · 03-09-2010 07:59 PM

dumb it down a bit but i think that would look nice if it was well painted

**AlecR2K** · 03-09-2010 08:13 PM

cleaned up.. a bit

**MASE P_2s** · 03-09-2010 08:20 PM

Originally Posted by kew1

dumb it down a bit but i think that would look nice if it was well painted

thnks bro n yea i agree it is a bit much lol

**FlippingChickens** · 03-09-2010 08:22 PM

stot - fix that s and your good bro that looks real nice

**LIZARD** · 03-09-2010 08:38 PM

alec-K's dope but the first curve of the S(top one) is way to far out. bring it in a little bit

**AlecR2K** · 03-09-2010 09:04 PM

hey thanks for pointing that out, makes a big difference

**rewz** · 03-09-2010 10:10 PM

i havent been on this website in a while used to write gees got cought and then started to write yank stoped changed to eak added a z then started wrighting zeak sounded kindda lame then switched to zuke then i didnt like the k and the e where they where so i switched them around and made zuek some stuff of the old and new

**chikkenbone** · 03-09-2010 10:21 PM

Originally Posted by -Empty-Can-

bump for crits.

definatly the best i've seen of yours, keep working on it for sure.

**medacog1** · 03-09-2010 11:00 PM

Originally Posted by B E A R

Different style - Better?

crits

Bear
maybe to connect your letters more...im just not feeling it whatsoever (but idk ask a really "bombingscience'er")

**RemoZ** · 03-09-2010 11:12 PM

Originally Posted by RemoZ

Gum- The I is pretty wack all around the other letters look good, would look nicer with a shadow.

Bear-Sketch for a long time.

Likely going to piece this the weekend after next(I'll be in Florida this weekend)

I plan to do a Dark brown to light brown fade from the bottom to top with maybe around 4 different shades, Black outline, Kinda light blue double outline.

I know the E needs some work and my shadow game is whack. But I really like the WOR

any crits?

Bump for crits

**AteskOne** · 03-09-2010 11:16 PM

zuek those simples are dope. and that N on the yank is fresh as hell man. good work.
been playing around tryna find a new name for quite a while now. i'm think im liking this name..