Okay so I am just starting out (it's been a couple of weeks) and I was hoping to get some crits from you guys.
1. Bomb/Throw-up idea:
2. Same concept but as a one-liner:
3. Bomb/Throw-up idea #2:
All done relatively quickly, just trying to develop them really for the moment. Open to constructive criticism. Thanks.
&& Before anyone says this name is taken. Ugh, I know it has been used before. It's just what I started writing and practicing with, ignore that part please.