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    yeah i know who he is but for right now im just usin the name on paper not hittin the city.thats mainly why i dont use the 2nd e. iv done the straight letter before but i never brought the 3D all the way back to the vanishing point. the v does look weird but thats how its supposed to but ill probably do it again with better 3D next time

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    if u didnt want the v to have any 3d ur vanishing point should go right 2 notbook rings(i guess)
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    nah the 3d follows the VP pretty well. what you should have done is put the VP below the letters. that way the V would have a little more 3d behind it. also dont let your 3D go all the way back to the VP. cut it off somewhere inbetween the letters and the VP.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sesh-it-up View Post
    bump this shit, if any thing needs work its the K.
    keep doin what you do!

    sevr- dont like the 3d but the letters are mint. lol
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    crits?...thanks for the 3D advice ill work on it
    Last edited by LIZARD; 03-26-2010 at 08:15 PM.

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    make your letters the same with, you are using bars, i can see but they are uneven take a look at the right R leg for example
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    Stick to the same thickness as that S. Reminds me of OhSnap's older shit.
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    Quote Originally Posted by LIZARD View Post

    crits?...thanks for the 3D advice ill work on it
    S looks kinda bulkier than everything else, im feelin the letters though
    Go in single long strokes with your markers >.< looks better in fills.

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    Quote Originally Posted by kew1 View Post
    I won't repeat what I said last time, but I will say this..
    If you look at your W..
    It looks like you are taking an L and a J.. or T and connecting them.
    This is why I suggested not laying it out. If it wasn't for the fact I have seen what you have been posting.. I would not know what to make of that.

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    rough draft for school project.

    says pergatory
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    sexy

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    Quote Originally Posted by AteskOne View Post
    rough draft for school project.

    says pergatory
    i think it looks clean man... but i think you used to many arrows to accentuate your letter structure... try substituting some of the arrows for something a little more original to your kinda taste...like a flourish or spiral etc... (experiment using an overlay of tracing paper) and possibly incorperate some line breaks and cracks in the letter itself
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    I don't understand why it keeps saying a moderator has to approve my posts...



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    Quote Originally Posted by pookienuts View Post
    i think it looks clean man... but i think you used to many arrows to accentuate your letter structure... try substituting some of the arrows for something a little more original to your kinda taste...like a flourish or spiral etc... (experiment using an overlay of tracing paper) and possibly incorperate some line breaks and cracks in the letter itself
    yeah i'm just trying to fill in the negative space. i havent really experimented much with extensions so it's hard for me to come up with new ideas for them. good idea with the tracing paper. i never thought of doing that. good looks man.
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    rewt-i like the top u should roll that some where.
    kan- the top one is decent not diggin the other two

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    Quote Originally Posted by LIZARD View Post

    crits?...thanks for the 3D advice ill work on it

    i would bust out the same bar that is on the bottom half of the S over unto the R to make it all more simetrical. my .02

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    Quote Originally Posted by Inlyn08 View Post
    I won't repeat what I said last time, but I will say this..
    If you look at your W..
    It looks like you are taking an L and a J.. or T and connecting them.
    This is why I suggested not laying it out. If it wasn't for the fact I have seen what you have been posting.. I would not know what to make of that.
    the K is wack too, looks like an M or a X, spread it out or just try again, peace.
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    eww no. the S is the worst letter why would you wanna repeat it. please dont do that sevr.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bets369R View Post
    eww no. the S is the worst letter why would you wanna repeat it. please dont do that sevr.

    NO the R is the worst letter for sure, that's why I was looking at it. whatever, my .02 but I think simetry might help the word. the S is decent for sure. a bigger E might help too.
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