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    make your letters the same with, you are using bars, i can see but they are uneven take a look at the right R leg for example
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    Stick to the same thickness as that S. Reminds me of OhSnap's older shit.
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    Quote Originally Posted by LIZARD View Post

    crits?...thanks for the 3D advice ill work on it
    S looks kinda bulkier than everything else, im feelin the letters though
    Go in single long strokes with your markers >.< looks better in fills.

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    Quote Originally Posted by kew1 View Post
    I won't repeat what I said last time, but I will say this..
    If you look at your W..
    It looks like you are taking an L and a J.. or T and connecting them.
    This is why I suggested not laying it out. If it wasn't for the fact I have seen what you have been posting.. I would not know what to make of that.

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    rough draft for school project.

    says pergatory
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    sexy

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    Quote Originally Posted by AteskOne View Post
    rough draft for school project.

    says pergatory
    i think it looks clean man... but i think you used to many arrows to accentuate your letter structure... try substituting some of the arrows for something a little more original to your kinda taste...like a flourish or spiral etc... (experiment using an overlay of tracing paper) and possibly incorperate some line breaks and cracks in the letter itself
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    I don't understand why it keeps saying a moderator has to approve my posts...



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    Quote Originally Posted by pookienuts View Post
    i think it looks clean man... but i think you used to many arrows to accentuate your letter structure... try substituting some of the arrows for something a little more original to your kinda taste...like a flourish or spiral etc... (experiment using an overlay of tracing paper) and possibly incorperate some line breaks and cracks in the letter itself
    yeah i'm just trying to fill in the negative space. i havent really experimented much with extensions so it's hard for me to come up with new ideas for them. good idea with the tracing paper. i never thought of doing that. good looks man.
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    rewt-i like the top u should roll that some where.
    kan- the top one is decent not diggin the other two

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    Quote Originally Posted by LIZARD View Post

    crits?...thanks for the 3D advice ill work on it

    i would bust out the same bar that is on the bottom half of the S over unto the R to make it all more simetrical. my .02

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    Quote Originally Posted by Inlyn08 View Post
    I won't repeat what I said last time, but I will say this..
    If you look at your W..
    It looks like you are taking an L and a J.. or T and connecting them.
    This is why I suggested not laying it out. If it wasn't for the fact I have seen what you have been posting.. I would not know what to make of that.
    the K is wack too, looks like an M or a X, spread it out or just try again, peace.
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    eww no. the S is the worst letter why would you wanna repeat it. please dont do that sevr.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bets369R View Post
    eww no. the S is the worst letter why would you wanna repeat it. please dont do that sevr.

    NO the R is the worst letter for sure, that's why I was looking at it. whatever, my .02 but I think simetry might help the word. the S is decent for sure. a bigger E might help too.
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    sevr that shit looks good make them all the same as the S and ur laughin.

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    sevr- i hate the whole thing especially that r,fix the left side of the v and that s is too fat..I hate your name too,you do know there is already someone with the name sever,right?

    atesk - your always pulling out some dope shit,love the whole thing just wish you kept the arrows to a minimum,more than 5 is already too much imo...but its dope and im looking foward to see what you will do with the 3d on that :]

    kans - the first one is on point just fix that k and make the n less fat

    rewt - dope,black letters white 3d and black forcefield,rock it on a wall!



    ^ a freestyle,messy as fuck and a lot of proportions are wrong,like the f and e have to go lower and im going to make a fatter t like the f and im going to whip up a new one soon cuz i kinda like how it came out despite all the flaws it has






    ^ really hate how my t came out


    ^ another pen freestyle

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    tofe-u gotta lose the swirly t and that akward extension on the f thats goin up on the 4th on.iv said this before so try to improve from the crits or people are ust gonna stop givin em....and YES I KNOW theres already a sever

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    in progress...


    tofe i think it would look better since your doing simples to make your letters of an equal width

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    Crits?


 

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