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    sevr that shit looks good make them all the same as the S and ur laughin.

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    sevr- i hate the whole thing especially that r,fix the left side of the v and that s is too fat..I hate your name too,you do know there is already someone with the name sever,right?

    atesk - your always pulling out some dope shit,love the whole thing just wish you kept the arrows to a minimum,more than 5 is already too much imo...but its dope and im looking foward to see what you will do with the 3d on that :]

    kans - the first one is on point just fix that k and make the n less fat

    rewt - dope,black letters white 3d and black forcefield,rock it on a wall!



    ^ a freestyle,messy as fuck and a lot of proportions are wrong,like the f and e have to go lower and im going to make a fatter t like the f and im going to whip up a new one soon cuz i kinda like how it came out despite all the flaws it has






    ^ really hate how my t came out


    ^ another pen freestyle

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    tofe-u gotta lose the swirly t and that akward extension on the f thats goin up on the 4th on.iv said this before so try to improve from the crits or people are ust gonna stop givin em....and YES I KNOW theres already a sever

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    in progress...


    tofe i think it would look better since your doing simples to make your letters of an equal width

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    Crits?

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    try droppin that background tealish color so the letters are more visible ... you notice how that lip on the l over laps to much on the u taking away from it try forming your letters at different angles so when you out the next letter in the work it doesnt overlap to much and hide a major portion of the letter...

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    jwhite-ur letters are slightly gettin bigger as u read it...when i do a style with the letters overlaping like that make a rectangle and make the letters fit inside on it and i have every letter touch the top and the bottom of it so u know there the same size

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    Quote Originally Posted by LIZARD View Post
    jwhite-ur letters are slightly gettin bigger as u read it...when i do a style with the letters overlaping like that make a rectangle and make the letters fit inside on it and i have every letter touch the top and the bottom of it so u know there the same size
    i completely missed that haha thanks

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    im going to extend the s extension but otherwise the finished sketch...

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    ^ i think it going to look a lot better than the last one. i think you should try something different with the 3d this time though


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    i like that shit^^ do a nuty fill with a crispy out line and a pink forcefeild to make it pop

    sear get at me for an exhange, mine wont look anyhting close to that. but holla if ur down
    Last edited by Sesh-it-up; 03-27-2010 at 04:29 PM.

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    Newest sketch,
    Don't really have any pens left, traded them away when i bought my graphic tablet, so i had to use a black ballpoint pen:



    Don't really like the result, i never seem to do, crits would be appriciated..

    /Shae

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    cool man... since you seem to be going simple try making the letters proportionate to each other same height, width etc... i like the idea of the background but try using a perspective for that as well so it will pop out at you ya know?

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    tryin new shit....crits?

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    so getting a new name is never easy
    ive been informed that theres a really good writer by the name of DEL so im putting that on the back burner
    i bet someone has the name Say but ill use it to sketch til i get a confirmed name in the future. anyway

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    I use longer names for practice. I get more letters down that way. I just can't rock a three letter name.
    No More Weekly Toy Battles.

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    ive tried alot of 3 letter combos...i cant just get the longer words to flow well, plus 3 is like my lucky numbre or something...i cant get down with 5 letter + words, and 4 just looks awkward sometimes

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    Quote Originally Posted by FlippingChickens View Post



    everytime you post i feel like a broken record.

    ONCE AGAIN NO BARS ARE EVEN
    YOUR T IS HIDEOUS
    THE FLAVOR/STYLE YOUR TRYING TO ADD TO YOUR LETTERS IS BEING EXECUTED TERRIBLY


    the best one is the second one. work off that one.

    btw i gagged looking at your tofe tag.

    inb4 get off my dick.

    just so you know i give harsh crits because clearly you dont listen to any crits. your shits been of the same quality since you joined the site. and before you throw a hissy fit and clog up the forum ill give you 2 options. just take my advice or battle me. either way is fine.
    Fuck off.

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    alright man,so you want me to repeat the 2nd sketch until i got all the proportions right,and then what?And i wouldnt know if i would want to battle ,you never post flicks of ur shit.And i have goten better,and i dont give 3 shits if u think otherwise...and wtf i do listen to crits,if not i wouldnt even atempt straight letters and i fixed the f in my throw,remember?

    mista - yea man i was going to tell u that del was taken already,im pretty sure hes a old school san fransisco writer...

    sevr - make the right bar of the v the same as the left,all the other letters look better now

    pookie - bro i like it,but on the real its mad hard to read

    shae - make the h bigger


    *** !!! BEFORE ANYONE CLAIMS THAT IM BITING ANYTHING ,I WILL ADMIT I BORROWED THE MOUSE AND THE NOTE AND THE RED THING FROM THE WRITER NOTE IN THE BLACKBOOK THREAD !!!




    any suggestions on what color i should make the letters??
    Last edited by FlippingChickens; 03-28-2010 at 06:47 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by LIZARD View Post

    tryin new shit....crits?
    that R is better for sure. not like I mentioned but still good. the V seems thinner than everthing... I dunno. those letters are pretty tight/straight but not that unique, looking good tho. the cracks are tiny.. tight too.
    "True merit, like a river, the deeper it is, the less noise it makes." ~Edward Frederick Halifax


 

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