Blackbooks

**hpir** · 03-30-2010 05:41 PM

Originally Posted by hpir

siko-loose the arrows throw a drop down shadow on it and itl be straight

crits?

leaks-bring in the right leg of the k more and the s is just kinda bland
Bump

**One Evil** · 03-30-2010 06:00 PM

Originally Posted by massacreman

almost everything is taken... as long as its not a real "legend" i dont really mind anymore... just saying

Safe Rc is pretty tight though. thats all im sayin.

non stolen

but.. to the safe on here.. do ur thing man im just sayin and showing some safe shit

**FlippingChickens** · 03-30-2010 06:27 PM

Safe you should change your name its disrespect man you toys have it all wrong saying it only matters if the person is a king,im sure you wouldnt want some jit writing ur name after yo been putting in work for a long period of time,just aint cool man..do ur research kids

sico - that s looks good,everything else is normal,i sujest working on that c,dont like that bar sitcking out to the left

monkey - the red one looks straight but id like to see it without a peice on the bottom its kinda distracting,and fix that e and its solid

resik - color the shadow in black and leave the letters white it looks fine

dimes - those slaps are sexy,i wish i knew how to use scissors that well lol

patchy - not working bro

leaks - i really hope that isnt ur k or s for ur throwy because it looks like ass ,the top is straight but u should outline and put a shadow man

kan - on the left the k needs work and the other one dont connec the k with the a

**BlacktodaFuture** · 03-30-2010 06:57 PM

im not changing my name. i live in vermont and im sure there are other safe's in the world just like there are many other dimes, leaks, alts, duke or whatever. and i dont think of it as disrespect at all. AND i have done my research but it isn't like i am able to find every Safe ever. I picked the name bc it fit me. end.

**AteskOne** · 03-30-2010 07:52 PM

Originally Posted by FlippingChickens

dimes - those slaps are sexy,i wish i knew how to use scissors that well lol

x-acto blades.

**LeaksOne** · 03-30-2010 09:19 PM

Originally Posted by FlippingChickens

leaks - i really hope that isnt ur k or s for ur throwy because it looks like ass ,the top is straight but u should outline and put a shadow man

thats cute your trying to be harsh on me haha. does that even look like a throw to you? and im not outlining it.

i noticed the s was boring and the k could use work but these are just rough sketches nothing serious. i dont even write leaks. thanks though fellas.

Originally Posted by FlippingChickens

Safe you should change your name its disrespect man you toys have it all wrong saying it only matters if the person is a king,im sure you wouldnt want some jit writing ur name after yo been putting in work for a long period of time,just aint cool man..do ur research kids

and really? your talking like your some big writer haha. how bout you research some bars and get your shit even.

**Inlyn08** · 03-30-2010 10:20 PM

If I found out someone "Local" was writing my shit, and they were horrible.. I'd more then likely change MY name. Because frankly speaking..
If they're writing like shit, people will more then likely remember shit. I'm not having some other person's garbage being mixed in with mine. And like it was said.. Unless YOU'RE a king then who fucking cares. People will remember fire, and they will remember shit. So, if it comes down to me switching my shit whatever. If I'm the better writer, then it won't be a thing. So, I'll just do what I'm doing.. and if I ever meet someone who writes the same shit as me ( Face to face of course ) then we'll battle. Otherwise, it doesn't matter to me. I'll get up, and worry about the "Politics" later.

Ya dig?

**smokeitup** · 03-30-2010 10:54 PM

crits?

**RemoZ** · 03-30-2010 11:09 PM

I don't know how everyone scene is but you guys should be lucky that you just need to have a different name. Here the scene is so small. Maybe like 6 - 10 of us who get up and about 25 including the chill spot kids that we don't even like people to have a close name such as FAKE and JAKE or NORE and WORE. So drop that complaining shit it isn't as bad as here...

**LIZARD** · 03-30-2010 11:09 PM

just screwin around with letters and i came up with this...crits?

**flask1995** · 03-30-2010 11:15 PM

eh, it's okay, the thing on the S, the part sticking out, I think that should be removed. but try working with lower and upper case letter's. most of them come out good.

**Inlyn08** · 03-30-2010 11:16 PM

Originally Posted by smokeitup

crits?

O looks like a U, the Z and N and bottom part of the E are too thin, and that random wide fat O doesn't really fit with the rest of it.
I like the middle one the best, personally.

**AteskOne** · 03-30-2010 11:41 PM

Originally Posted by Inlyn08

If I found out someone "Local" was writing my shit, and they were horrible.. I'd more then likely change MY name. Because frankly speaking..
If they're writing like shit, people will more then likely remember shit. I'm not having some other person's garbage being mixed in with mine. And like it was said.. Unless YOU'RE a king then who fucking cares. People will remember fire, and they will remember shit. So, if it comes down to me switching my shit whatever. If I'm the better writer, then it won't be a thing. So, I'll just do what I'm doing.. and if I ever meet someone who writes the same shit as me ( Face to face of course ) then we'll battle. Otherwise, it doesn't matter to me. I'll get up, and worry about the "Politics" later.

Ya dig?

change your name? nah that's when you beat some ass. if a kid's rocking your name make sure you cross it the fuck out everywhere you see it and let heads know whats good with imposters.

**mista_dza** · 03-30-2010 11:50 PM

wrote saw onto a canvas that was pretty old and i sprayed over a while ago (you might be able to see through some of the yellow to see the original letters aha)