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    you get my point, more feminine and less manly, she can still be a badass but she neeeds to be more feminine not like a man in disguise you know

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    Sear- honestly im not to fond of the extension goin across the bottom of the R almost makes is seem like a B , but thats just me i dunno
    anyway
    something i did the otehr night picture is dark my bad

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    Dza- a bit generic, but you're keeping it simple. thatll pay off later.
    if you stand back and look, the A is too fat for the piece, and the w is lacking major. The s is the generic part, but its most on point. Don't be afraid of round edges.

    First pen freestyle, first piece, (whatever you wanna call it.) in months.

    The T is lacking major, I know. Says BENT LIFE.
    Crits are majorly appreciated.
    whats2

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    Quote Originally Posted by Eon 1 View Post
    Im wanting to get into slaps and I was wondering, are they just stickers or what..
    Quote Originally Posted by Werse View Post
    At least that "kid" can draw a throwie...

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    I think the bend in the leg of the R is too much.




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    Its a B, fine sir.
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    Oh, not, not you dude.
    Haha, I meant that shit Dank posted.
    I don't really like the things on the top left of your Es, though.
    I think that your Es would actually look a lot better without them




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    not dont but what u think
    and your b looks like a r hommie




    Quote Originally Posted by Eon 1 View Post
    Im wanting to get into slaps and I was wondering, are they just stickers or what..
    Quote Originally Posted by Werse View Post
    At least that "kid" can draw a throwie...

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    Haha. Yea, I realized after I posted it. Thanks for the crits though.
    whats2

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    Quote Originally Posted by -Dank-DK- View Post



    not dont but what u think
    and your b looks like a r hommie
    That K...

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    backbone to tall..k
    "Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)

    "I'm a simple man. All I want is enough sleep for two normal men, enough whiskey for three, and enough women for four."-Joel Rosenberg

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    That K is the only good letter on the whole canvas, haha.

    For real though, I'm not digging any of the other letters, They are too disproportionate.




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    I like the S the best lol

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    now all i need is 4 more people to like the a the r and two people to like each c and i can fuse thoses 6 people together to make one person that likes it

    im fuckin so happy rainbows are flyin out my ass




    Quote Originally Posted by Eon 1 View Post
    Im wanting to get into slaps and I was wondering, are they just stickers or what..
    Quote Originally Posted by Werse View Post
    At least that "kid" can draw a throwie...

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    MOAR LULZ




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    crits?

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    give crits to get them
    all i say is
    USE BARS
    CHANGE COLOUR SCHEME
    TIDY IT UP
    HIGHLIGHTS OR INLINE MIGHT SAVE THIS PIECE
    OHKER 24
    DIRTIER THEN YOUR DAD'S BROWSING HISTORY

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    trying to do something with the letters




    flask- i like the overall piece but not the letters. s is the best

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    Wtf did you do to those bars?
    take off all those sharp warts on those letters and you'll be fine (The bottom one).
    the top on is gey, mainly because of those random bar extensions (idk if i'd even classify those as extensions)...

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    ignore them lol, i didnt realise how bad they are im workin on something now and il post it later


 

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