Blackbooks

[Flawless Victory]

MOAR LULZ

[flask1995]

crits?

[massacreman]

give crits to get them
all i say is
USE BARS
CHANGE COLOUR SCHEME
TIDY IT UP
HIGHLIGHTS OR INLINE MIGHT SAVE THIS PIECE

[RES4]

trying to do something with the letters




flask- i like the overall piece but not the letters. s is the best

[gumOnShoe]

Wtf did you do to those bars?
take off all those sharp warts on those letters and you'll be fine (The bottom one).
the top on is gey, mainly because of those random bar extensions (idk if i'd even classify those as extensions)...

[RES4]

ignore them lol, i didnt realise how bad they are im workin on something now and il post it later

[gumOnShoe]

try taking a peek in the picture gallery (Big Boy threaads) and see how they mess with extensions n' shit. however, i'd only suggest messing with those extensions until you can make a CLEAN simp.
cause trust me, Bad structure+extensions= Eyes Vomiting.

[RES4]

hows this

[gumOnShoe]

bad, make your bars even, if you're using them.......
3D is weird too.
look for a 3D tutorial thread on here, i think it's in the the Tool's n' tips forum. shit helped me with my 3D.

[Meph*]

improving?..let me know

[shem]

start... worth finishing?

[Meph*]

yeh looks pretty sick

[flask1995]

?, I have been giving crits, you just dont see my picture because i haven't done them. I have gave like atleast 5 crits to other people without me putting a piece up

[BlacktodaFuture]

i say you finish it. it's weird and different but lets see what you can do w. it.

[smokeitup]

[Sesh-it-up]

GAY AS MY 9TH GRADE ENGLISH TEACHER, he was full on fag too by the way.

[smokeitup]

i like it.

[Sesh-it-up]

my english teacher? wow u are fucked

[smokeitup]

yeah your english teacher, haha naw the sketches.

not really the first one but i reckon the 2nd one is decent.

[Capo Izi]

shem & smokeitup- illlll.








Crits? The last one is for some chick.