lmao.. augor would eat your style, keep tryin.
Last edited by Sesh-it-up; 04-11-2010 at 04:51 PM.
are you high? he's fucking SPONSORED for a reason, retard. of course he's better than me. but he does the same type of shit. my shit is clearly legible, you just can't read graffiti, and that's your own fault. you're the one that sucks dick, so i suggest you go hit the books some more.
I FUCKS WIT' THIS.
keep at it man, that Augor-ish steez looks real gutter.
i like the whole concept, but you need fix the structure of the piece as a whole. for example, the A's structure is hurting bad... it's twisted in a very uncomfortable position, the U bearly has a presence.
Last edited by gumOnShoe; 04-11-2010 at 07:38 PM.
GET YOUR BARS UP.
Your flow and letter structure is way off, though, homie.
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
word, thanks for the crits. i was just fucking around at first with the U, then i decided to actually finish it and made it bigger. i think if the D was smaller it would work. and i agree about the A.
dude, before anything, try to get your lines to come out cleaner.
you got that parkinson's hand lol, BUT, i do too.
i find it easier to keep a loose hand though, and draw my lines faster y'know, like flick my pencil to get lines looking crisp.
this combats the shakiness i get when sketching. try it.
like i had a king smack my book once, and he did his piece SO fast, lines came out ruler straight. fucker freestyled what i was writing at the time too.
Last edited by gumOnShoe; 04-11-2010 at 08:11 PM.
GET YOUR BARS UP.
a few things i did in my blackbook
the purple one is hard to read cuz i lost my white pen but w.e
We're a comedic duo. like Barack Obama and Will Smith
Last one.. is my pick of the three, to be honest.
where the good shit lmfao fucking toys
Last edited by woonybomber; 04-11-2010 at 10:43 PM.
OneEvil - structure structure structure
Zennegen - what gum said
RaDawg - not bad, all id say is put a little more care into the dropshaddow and forcefield, kinda reminds me of rihno or w/e, also work on the E, ark is good
Spam Goes Red
ignore the shitty hand
Zen, I dig it.
.add some arrows and stars.
.put plenty of dot3 in that ink.
.bathrooms are the best ups.
.and bombing science knows best.
pic is too big, click the link to see it
i need a pattern/colour help. anyone care to help?
Last edited by sezer; 04-12-2010 at 12:49 AM.
Outta' respect I smash wack toys; put 'em out their misery and send 'em to that upper room. Knock! Knock! Who? Death, mothafucka'! BOOM!
Before I bang, I go and get high, homey.