Blackbooks

[TheToy]

are you high? he's fucking SPONSORED for a reason, retard. of course he's better than me. but he does the same type of shit. my shit is clearly legible, you just can't read graffiti, and that's your own fault. you're the one that sucks dick, so i suggest you go hit the books some more.

If anything, you do the same shit he does. If you were the pioneer, you'd be sponsored.

But...

[AlecR2K]

SPAM, its looking good but the M is way too wide. tighten that shit up and keep going.

[zennegen]

thetoy, you realize nobody thinks you're funny right? you're just a troll that should have been banned forever ago. you don't post flicks and you don't post constructive criticism, real talk, just got fuck yourself.

[GASM!]

Quick B/W sketch..



Color scheme attempted with Ironlak colors in Photoshop using eyedropper tool..



Crits on letters? Colors? Anything appreciated.

[PegCityBoy]

crits?

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pic is too big, click the link to see it

i need a pattern/colour help. anyone care to help?

Quick B/W sketch..

Color scheme attempted with Ironlak colors in Photoshop using eyedropper tool..


Crits on letters? Colors? Anything appreciated.

fuckin kids, give crits to get em

[-Empty-Can-]

you don't post flicks and you don't post constructive criticism, real talk, just got fuck yourself.

Do you even do either of those?

[NICCSACC]

that gazm is kinda bush. learn to use your whole arm to make smooth lines. it makes it look more legit if you wanna call it that. ive seen soooo much worse tho.

[GASM!]

that gazm is kinda bush. learn to use your whole arm to make smooth lines. it makes it look more legit if you wanna call it that. ive seen soooo much worse tho.

Thanks for the advice!

[FlippingChickens]

gasm it would look better if you try a more simple throwy,looks bad,that m is bad,the s could be mistaken for a c and the g is really bad

crits??






^ bic pen freestyle

[RedEyes]

Tof-The top one has potential, just lose the random bends on your letters like the F and the T.
Sketch and name in progress.

[PegCityBoy]

Tofe/chickens - bottom picture top piece is good, other 2 need some work, drop the arrows. work on the F structure, it doesnt have any right now. on some letters your usin bars and others your not, make sure you always use bars. work on those and you should notice a significant improvement.

Akor - watch out for bar widths, i'd say don't shortchange your O, R needs a bit of work, and if your gonna have that line connecting the K and R don't tuck it behind the other legs of the letters. keep workin on it

Remember Boys and girls, always rock yer simps


fuck the shadow


sloppy

fuck the M

[zennegen]

Do you even do either of those?

i do, actually. check a few pages back, derp derp.

[sinkilla1]

was up negroes just a quick sketch no pencil free styled
spam clean up your simples dawg
gasm idk try straiight letters there fun
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[-Empty-Can-]

i do, actually. check a few pages back, derp derp.

One time doesn't count dood.

[sinkilla1]

zen no offence but you blow sike take ofence all you want i dont think you suck but that peice or whatever you put up did

[sezer]

sinkilla1- nice.
pegcityboy - nice, keep doing simple's and then you can start breaking rules.

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crits?

[sinkilla1]

don t have such a long bar on your s the top right of the s make it shorter and try and not to make them so tall that it looks like ur strtching your letters but nice keep working

[BlacktodaFuture]

sin, that E has some potential.

Tofe: im done giving you crits you dont listen to shit

sezer: maybe don't do your bars so long but idk im feel like it would look good once you experiment with it more.

spam: GOOD WORK! pink is my favorite.

[ManikOner]

wtf why you guys beefin on Umad? his shits totally legit, theres tons of different styles of graffiti and in his hes killin it. sure theres a few errors and if you cant read it Sesh then learn to. every style reads a different way. i know hes better then your stuff. and as for the tag i did, i know it was shit. thats why if you read what i wrote i said 'ignore the tag'.

Umad - i think it looks pretty dope but yea the U is kinds whacked. the A's not too bad.

Gasm - it aint to bad but i dont dig your M. make your A a little wider too.

Tofe - the first ones cool but lose the extension on the bottom of your F. in the bottom pic i like the top piece. just dont curve the top of the T. overall i dont like 3d over letters.

Spam - last ones a little sloppy, resize your A and M, keep bars same width too.

Redo - i dig this piece. extend your R leg and dont disconnect the bar on the D

Sezr - work on your letter structure a little more, theyd be dope.

[GrimeTime]

just finished this, what you think? helpful critz appreciated