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    SPAM, its looking good but the M is way too wide. tighten that shit up and keep going.

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    thetoy, you realize nobody thinks you're funny right? you're just a troll that should have been banned forever ago. you don't post flicks and you don't post constructive criticism, real talk, just got fuck yourself.

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    Quick B/W sketch..



    Color scheme attempted with Ironlak colors in Photoshop using eyedropper tool..



    Crits on letters? Colors? Anything appreciated.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sezer View Post

    crits?

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    pic is too big, click the link to see it

    i need a pattern/colour help. anyone care to help?
    Quote Originally Posted by GASM! View Post
    Quick B/W sketch..

    Color scheme attempted with Ironlak colors in Photoshop using eyedropper tool..


    Crits on letters? Colors? Anything appreciated.
    fuckin kids, give crits to get em



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    Quote Originally Posted by zennegen View Post
    you don't post flicks and you don't post constructive criticism, real talk, just got fuck yourself.
    Do you even do either of those?

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    fuck you zen
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    that gazm is kinda bush. learn to use your whole arm to make smooth lines. it makes it look more legit if you wanna call it that. ive seen soooo much worse tho.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NICCSACC View Post
    that gazm is kinda bush. learn to use your whole arm to make smooth lines. it makes it look more legit if you wanna call it that. ive seen soooo much worse tho.
    Thanks for the advice!

  8. #100628

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    gasm it would look better if you try a more simple throwy,looks bad,that m is bad,the s could be mistaken for a c and the g is really bad

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  9. #100629

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    Tof-The top one has potential, just lose the random bends on your letters like the F and the T.
    Sketch and name in progress.

  10. #100630

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    Tofe/chickens - bottom picture top piece is good, other 2 need some work, drop the arrows. work on the F structure, it doesnt have any right now. on some letters your usin bars and others your not, make sure you always use bars. work on those and you should notice a significant improvement.

    Akor - watch out for bar widths, i'd say don't shortchange your O, R needs a bit of work, and if your gonna have that line connecting the K and R don't tuck it behind the other legs of the letters. keep workin on it

    Remember Boys and girls, always rock yer simps


    fuck the shadow


    sloppy

    fuck the M
    Last edited by PegCityBoy; 04-12-2010 at 04:17 PM.



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    Quote Originally Posted by -Empty-Can- View Post
    Do you even do either of those?
    i do, actually. check a few pages back, derp derp.

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    was up negroes just a quick sketch no pencil free styled
    spam clean up your simples dawg
    gasm idk try straiight letters there fun
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    YO dawgs I M about to go rack some sweet paper so i Can Write My Leet Graff laterz

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    Quote Originally Posted by zennegen View Post
    i do, actually. check a few pages back, derp derp.
    One time doesn't count dood.

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    fuck you zen
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  14. #100634

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    zen no offence but you blow sike take ofence all you want i dont think you suck but that peice or whatever you put up did
    Quote Originally Posted by woonybomber View Post
    YO dawgs I M about to go rack some sweet paper so i Can Write My Leet Graff laterz

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    sinkilla1- nice.
    pegcityboy - nice, keep doing simple's and then you can start breaking rules.

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    crits?

  16. #100636

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    don t have such a long bar on your s the top right of the s make it shorter and try and not to make them so tall that it looks like ur strtching your letters but nice keep working
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    YO dawgs I M about to go rack some sweet paper so i Can Write My Leet Graff laterz

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    sin, that E has some potential.

    Tofe: im done giving you crits you dont listen to shit

    sezer: maybe don't do your bars so long but idk im feel like it would look good once you experiment with it more.

    spam: GOOD WORK! pink is my favorite.
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    those new tupac shakuras are dope.
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    I heard fromthegrave likes it in the butt!!!

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    wtf why you guys beefin on Umad? his shits totally legit, theres tons of different styles of graffiti and in his hes killin it. sure theres a few errors and if you cant read it Sesh then learn to. every style reads a different way. i know hes better then your stuff. and as for the tag i did, i know it was shit. thats why if you read what i wrote i said 'ignore the tag'.

    Umad - i think it looks pretty dope but yea the U is kinds whacked. the A's not too bad.

    Gasm - it aint to bad but i dont dig your M. make your A a little wider too.

    Tofe - the first ones cool but lose the extension on the bottom of your F. in the bottom pic i like the top piece. just dont curve the top of the T. overall i dont like 3d over letters.

    Spam - last ones a little sloppy, resize your A and M, keep bars same width too.

    Redo - i dig this piece. extend your R leg and dont disconnect the bar on the D

    Sezr - work on your letter structure a little more, theyd be dope.

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    just finished this, what you think? helpful critz appreciated
    -GodKillsKids-

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    Quote Originally Posted by zennegen View Post
    thetoy, you realize nobody thinks you're funny right? you're just a troll that should have been banned forever ago. you don't post flicks and you don't post constructive criticism, real talk, just got fuck yourself.
    you are a lieing bitch
    the toy makes me LOL
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