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    Quote Originally Posted by zennegen View Post
    trying out some new shit... here's the black and white version because i know i'm gonna fuck up coloring it.



    resik, on that bottom one, change up the I so it doesn't blend so much the with K, otherwise, pretty good. HETR, i'm diggin that so far, just work on that hand.
    lol, is that an obeese mutant rat vomiting?
    I FUCKS WIT' THIS.
    keep at it man, that Augor-ish steez looks real gutter.
    i like the whole concept, but you need fix the structure of the piece as a whole. for example, the A's structure is hurting bad... it's twisted in a very uncomfortable position, the U bearly has a presence.
    Last edited by gumOnShoe; 04-11-2010 at 06:38 PM.
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    Your flow and letter structure is way off, though, homie.
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    word, thanks for the crits. i was just fucking around at first with the U, then i decided to actually finish it and made it bigger. i think if the D was smaller it would work. and i agree about the A.

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    some slop im just fucking with.. i know if i took my time and re did this it would look much better but had to goto work ...and if i fixed the S some more and made the E a tad bigger..



    not finished.. prob wont finish but well see.
    crits.
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    dude, before anything, try to get your lines to come out cleaner.
    you got that parkinson's hand lol, BUT, i do too.
    i find it easier to keep a loose hand though, and draw my lines faster y'know, like flick my pencil to get lines looking crisp.
    this combats the shakiness i get when sketching. try it.
    like i had a king smack my book once, and he did his piece SO fast, lines came out ruler straight. fucker freestyled what i was writing at the time too.
    Last edited by gumOnShoe; 04-11-2010 at 07:11 PM.
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    a few things i did in my blackbook
    the purple one is hard to read cuz i lost my white pen but w.e
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shay70 View Post
    a few things i did in my blackbook
    the purple one is hard to read cuz i lost my white pen but w.e
    crits please
    The first one, the 3D is inconsistent. Not sure if that E should be as large as it is. The letters need work, pretty much. The second one.. throw that out. No disrespect, but.. you're right it is hard to read. But, not because of the colors. Because of the letters.
    Last one.. is my pick of the three, to be honest.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RADAWG View Post
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    where the good shit lmfao fucking toys
    jk
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    fuck you zen
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    OneEvil - structure structure structure
    Zennegen - what gum said
    RaDawg - not bad, all id say is put a little more care into the dropshaddow and forcefield, kinda reminds me of rihno or w/e, also work on the E, ark is good

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    ignore the shitty hand



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    are poster paints good for black books
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    is your mom good for fucking?
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    Zen, I dig it.
    .add some arrows and stars.
    .put plenty of dot3 in that ink.
    .bathrooms are the best ups.
    .and bombing science knows best.

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    Quote Originally Posted by One Evil View Post
    some slop im just fucking with.. i know if i took my time and re did this it would look much better but had to goto work ...and if i fixed the S some more and made the E a tad bigger..



    not finished.. prob wont finish but well see.
    crits.
    lmao bumo dat

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    http://i43.tinypic.com/35bdx06.jpg

    crits?

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    pic is too big, click the link to see it

    i need a pattern/colour help. anyone care to help?
    Last edited by sezer; 04-11-2010 at 11:49 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by zennegen View Post
    are you high? he's fucking SPONSORED for a reason, retard. of course he's better than me. but he does the same type of shit. my shit is clearly legible, you just can't read graffiti, and that's your own fault. you're the one that sucks dick, so i suggest you go hit the books some more.
    If anything, you do the same shit he does. If you were the pioneer, you'd be sponsored.

    But...

    Outta' respect I smash wack toys; put 'em out their misery and send 'em to that upper room. Knock! Knock! Who? Death, mothafucka'! BOOM!

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    SPAM, its looking good but the M is way too wide. tighten that shit up and keep going.

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    thetoy, you realize nobody thinks you're funny right? you're just a troll that should have been banned forever ago. you don't post flicks and you don't post constructive criticism, real talk, just got fuck yourself.

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    Quick B/W sketch..



    Color scheme attempted with Ironlak colors in Photoshop using eyedropper tool..



    Crits on letters? Colors? Anything appreciated.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sezer View Post

    crits?

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    pic is too big, click the link to see it

    i need a pattern/colour help. anyone care to help?
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    Quick B/W sketch..

    Color scheme attempted with Ironlak colors in Photoshop using eyedropper tool..


    Crits on letters? Colors? Anything appreciated.
    fuckin kids, give crits to get em



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    are poster paints good for black books
    Quote Originally Posted by zennegen View Post
    is your mom good for fucking?
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    i like to spike my gelato with vicadin...their like little sprinkles that take the pain away...

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    Quote Originally Posted by zennegen View Post
    you don't post flicks and you don't post constructive criticism, real talk, just got fuck yourself.
    Do you even do either of those?

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    fuck you zen
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