1-too skinny
2-the last a being turned around makes it look like an e
n the ovals for dots in letters idea u have goin is dope,
just not on those letters cuz they r too skinny
3-finish it
4-good throwie
5-d looks like an a same thing again with the last a lookin like an e
but overall just work with it
6-ur best 1, i dig it all around, now redo it n color it
7-bars r f'ed![]()
"Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)
"I'm a simple man. All I want is enough sleep for two normal men, enough whiskey for three, and enough women for four."-Joel Rosenberg
The 5th sketch has the most potential and don't do the last a backwards, thats whack as fuck. if you want symmetry use capital letters.
I'd honestly say do regular letters, like this AGENDA untill you can make those clean.
crits on style/letters isnt really what im after
these r sketches i colored since i never color shit
sharpies/decos/prismas/elmers painters r what i use currently n below is my blender
ne crits/suggestions on COLORING gr8ly appreciated
*i know my 3d highlights r currently wack*
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Last edited by viseversa101; 04-13-2010 at 12:22 AM.
"Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)
"I'm a simple man. All I want is enough sleep for two normal men, enough whiskey for three, and enough women for four."-Joel Rosenberg
only ones i really like are the 2nd and 4th. 2nd because of the colors and 4th because its simple, but why is there a black blob where the 3d should be? and whats that on the 2nd one, is that a frog sticker or somethin?
Last edited by smokeitup; 04-13-2010 at 12:38 AM.
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sum sticker of ooze n stars, the black block is there cuz i wanted to break the 3d to its vanishing point
"Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)
"I'm a simple man. All I want is enough sleep for two normal men, enough whiskey for three, and enough women for four."-Joel Rosenberg
a little bit of zuek and pigs plz look me up ahahaha
hey vise, your stuff is good man but i think your letters need just a tad more structure fro what i've seen thouhg, good stuff.
sin, i like that, but i would cange the d a little idk
vise - its cool that ur pracicing how to color and shit but u gotta be focusing on letters more..
zuek - try doing the first one without putting the bars skinny
and the 2nd one is dope minus the things coming out the bottom of ur z u and k
Black and silver Vise is dope.
Z has some nice, okay things.
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new word possibly
guess i post this here... fuck it.
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this too its pretty old at this point. dont kill me.
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Nicksack - the bottom piece is pretty sick, i wouldnt connect the C like that in Sack though. shit looks dope.
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