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    Quote Originally Posted by Fury View Post
    Ares - I like your character, it reminds me of Twisted Metal for some reason haha. Your A and R are on point, but that E is ugly, and your S could use some work.
    When I saw this, it made me hit the books.
    Sadly, when I went to color I realized I had shit for markers. Less then what I thought, that is. So, at any rate.. not happy about the colors and I know it sure needs some tweaking.
    Crits, suggestions, advice.
    Thanks!

    The clown.. LOL
    EDIT: OH SHIT LOL.. I forgot to color in the gums....
    Last edited by Inlyn08; 04-17-2010 at 07:20 PM. Reason: I'm a dumbass....

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    ^ Describes what I just did....

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    Quote Originally Posted by CrustOner View Post
    Bring the EM closer to the SH
    this is dead on... like i said maybe intertwine them bitches...

    and gasm fury pretty much said it all... that outline is too much and distracting, and if u wanna do a bubble fill like that get some markers or somethin cuz it doesnt look right being the same color as the outline, go simpler thats all

    ares the first char and letters were way better...
    Last edited by Zookyook; 04-17-2010 at 07:29 PM.

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    flickr.com/photos/smokeitup421
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    Quote Originally Posted by CrustOner View Post
    Gruet?
    Yeah.
    Quote Originally Posted by the cannabis evangelist View Post
    cum to my trailer park an call juggalos gay,
    every motherfucker whos down with the clown will stomp ur ass

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    i dont really like the first flik but i like the k and E on the second one,.

    ok so i changed my name to Evok or Evox (i know lol, no one asked)
    juss messin around today


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    smoke-nice work, keep it up
    evok- i guarantee sum1 will fight with u over that name eventually lol
    but nice so far none the less
    "Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)

    "I'm a simple man. All I want is enough sleep for two normal men, enough whiskey for three, and enough women for four."-Joel Rosenberg

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    the little SIT 3d one is pretty nice man.... and i cant draw shit on a computer so the bottom one is nice to me! hah... just looks like u need to smooth the bars out, the lines and thicknesses are kinda shaky

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    thanks man! and ok i do that!

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    cool, the letter structure in the first sketch is the strongest so try to work in that direction

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    fuckaround I think I might have shrinkin letter syndrome ^_^

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    coca - love that squirrel, R's need work but the rest is looking nice,
    take - obviously a bit sloppy, but likes it
    yarbles and smokeitup - lovely



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    I'm feelin that S. Maybe bring the bar on the K up a bit? maybe not idk w/e you like. Definatley thicken parts of the G up and possibly tilt the top bar downwards the the one on the S

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    steppin out of str8s to have sumthin else to color
    lately ive been playin with blending colors and wanted sumthin different
    first pic came from 2 pencils taped together
    the 2nd was done with a sharpie...didnt realize how long that style takes if ur piky
    3rd is a bubble version of the fourth that markings suggested
    2 the fourth is what it is

    i duno when il get around to coloring but figured id post to livin up this thread






    "Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)

    "I'm a simple man. All I want is enough sleep for two normal men, enough whiskey for three, and enough women for four."-Joel Rosenberg

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    mezzaround. A bit slopy cus I don't have finetipped paint markers.

    Lol toez^

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    nice sandals, dude.
    GET YOUR BARS UP.

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    daaam cut those toe nails
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    That one toe nail is starting to look huge..
    LOL

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    homie got those knives yo, lol.
    i just noticed.
    GET YOUR BARS UP.


 

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