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"Yo there is no escape!No recourse when I resort to forces of sorts reserved for bloodsports"
Originally Posted by 408Bomber
im gonna paint the buildings and bat signal with black sharpie i think..any ideas for the rest of the background?
crits would be nice
...i like my batman, came out sick!!!
^/sigh
cyto- can we get a straight on pic, cant really crit it from that perspective.
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so change your name and do it without Gor just try something new with G.
and cyto i dont like the filling..
meph i like your batman.but i liked your previous "meph" more than this one.
"Yo there is no escape!No recourse when I resort to forces of sorts reserved for bloodsports"
make your H wider, its too tucked in. dosent balance out with the width on the other letters
good call
"Yo there is no escape!No recourse when I resort to forces of sorts reserved for bloodsports"
I think the are R should be a bit skinnier towards the top. Then bring the E a tad bit closer.
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the middle bar of the e should go more towards the middle
i dont like the e of the black one and the f came got fucked on the flame peice
keep your bars the same width, have the ends of the bars going into the other ends rather than stacking them up on each other. the bottom of your T for example. check how you have a chunk sittin on top the extension, smooth it down an work it into the other bar.
do dads an shit, didnt alter it too much
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HELL YEA THANKS GUY! I have trouble building and constructing letters,ive always been a slow learner and sometimes reading isnt enough for me to fully comprehend ( i think im like dislexic or some shit ) so to visually see my mistakes was nice for a change.Your advice is always on point,thanks for the support man its really stepping up my game.
sall good homie, ive rocked a few nice sketches too lately. so i guess karmas helpin me back. any time. i woulda did that ms paint thing earlier but ive got serious adhd and i typically dont have patience to do so. but today i was able to with my morning coffee
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i got fuckeddd up tonight and there is a flaws and messynes in the peice but overall i love how the letters looked..im looking foward to playing with them tomorrow when im not so fucked up..the t shouldnt have came out so skinny and some flaws here and there but fuck im really drunk ill have much more focus tomorrow
forcefield really determines how fucked up i really am,idk how it got that sloppy
Last edited by FlippingChickens; 05-30-2010 at 10:53 PM.
just keep working at it, parallel lines look very good if you use em well. the inside bar of your F needs work, same with the bottom of your F. the bottom of your T needs work. make the top bar of the T longer. and your E is much larger than the rest of your piece. make them all the size height. the top extension on your O make a bit shorter. try 2/3rds of what you have now.
but forreal, the bottom bar of your T. take that top line and make it go straight to that corner if you know what i mean.
an yo, check the bar use on this quick paint sketch. see how i run my bars through each other? on the T in particular. the bottom bars run into the ends of the other bars. by doing that you get good bar proportioning and it looks clean an whatnot. run the bars through the other bars so all your bars are even and flow well.
dont use the E in this sketch on your piece though, its the E i use on my ground ups.
Good looks guy,im gonna work on it now.
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