thanks for all the crits yo... i did that one kinda fast but i learned from my mistakes and itll show in the next piece that i do that way... i hope
Aspek- nice and clean, I like it
Rail- Really nice simples
some new stuff, thinking of going with REKT instead of REK...
and a sloppy simple pen sketch:
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Some new stuff. Need to clean this shit lol
that says fresk right? the s on the first one is beast,k looks good but i think u should kick out the bottom right more,all the other letters dont looks bad but they need to still be played with,the bottom page f is sick and everything about the k is dope except at the top part of the k sticking out to the right
Last edited by FlippingChickens; 07-12-2010 at 07:20 AM.
Thanks for crits Tofe.
Yes,it says Fresk.
I think you should add one more connection like between T an F, and your E looks like euro
sign so I think you can use it and make one more sketch witch euro instead of E.
Ive tried to post a couple of my blackbook sketches and they arent appearing?
tryna get back in the groove.. buddy writes enlite, got too lazy and didnt finish the last "e"...
tomorrow - nice flow, def dig the first one. but i dont like the R
meko, 2nd flick i like, good proportions, thats something i'd like to see on a wall
fresk_ i like, feels like the top of the R on the first one need more definition
tofe_ good progression anyway, your background splat is cool and well executed but focus on your letters
meko_ i dog thsoe blue throws the most, keep on rockin it.
latest thing im happy with, obviously needs color, etc but im just trying out these new ideas
meko your letters are nice but you need to work on your handstyles.your writes are like 4 or 5 months farther back in progression.may i suggest makeing your m's less like this m and more like this M.it would flow better with the rest of your letters in the tag.your trying to use a soft m with that hard k and it doesnt work well.just sayin you..
are names are so similar i just thought id throw my .02 cents in there.i would show you what i was talking about but i dont have a printer at the moment haha.
Meko- I love your style dude its really sick, umm i think your throwie could use a little work
Tofe- Quit all those extenstions and connections and dodads and try some simps
lifes a bitch but god forbid the bitch divorce me ill be flooded with ice so hell fire cant scorch me
tofe-that e is wack
Meko-clean piece, that throwish piece with a cross in the O is sick, go paint that
anyonefeelin this throwie?
^the one across the bottom is tight
slek - blue one is tight,but fix the e
shem - that looks tight,but the only thing im not feelin is the 3d on the s going down the page so much,still it looks different and thats good,keep working with it..
5min simple ....tofe if you gave your self advice you would be better.