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    ^the one across the bottom is tight

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    fuck you zen

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    slek - blue one is tight,but fix the e

    shem - that looks tight,but the only thing im not feelin is the 3d on the s going down the page so much,still it looks different and thats good,keep working with it..


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    tofe- for once i like it
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    make this one a lowercase e, get rid of the tf connection and curve the f more to match the t

    on the second blue one lose the connection and make the e smaller and your good

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    5min simple ....tofe if you gave your self advice you would be better.

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    idk401- The letters and drop shadow are great. I think maybe the shading on the inside of the letters could be blended alittle more though

    Flippingchickens- Try not to cover your 'O' so much, start by getting rid of the connection between the T and F. The E seems to be the letter your having trouble with, try messing around with a lowercase 'e' or a capital 'E' thats not as curvy

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    Quote Originally Posted by FlippingChickens View Post
    slek - blue one is tight,but fix the e

    shem - that looks tight,but the only thing im not feelin is the 3d on the s going down the page so much,still it looks different and thats good,keep working with it..

    Yeaahh man. Thats what im talkin about, nice and simple, Love this.

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    thanks fresk!







    Last edited by FlippingChickens; 07-14-2010 at 11:24 AM.

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    not sure at all how to post shit but heres some pages hopefully

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    not sure to how post shit at all but heres some pages hopefully

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    GET YOUR BARS UP.

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    taht TOFE throwie is dopeee.

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    last 3 i have done
    have at em Xo) lol








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    Twyst- the flic in the middle has the most potential. the first one I couldnt really read untill I saw your others. On the last, dont connect the letters, and the twists are kind of odd on some spots...only really works on the T I guess. Stick with keyboard letters like in your second flic for now, dont overlap them so much.

    Tofe- the orange and yellow simple is looking alot better, try not to make your E bigger than the other letters. The throw in the same flic is good.
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    Quote Originally Posted by No_TomorroW View Post
    Some new stuff. Need to clean this shit lol

    I think that they both look really nice but to me the E in the first one is weak and the S in the second one is weak so if you had the E from the second in the first as well and the S from the first in the second as well they it would be really well put together. Would love to see some sketches cleaned up!

    Gum - that's a sweet throwie it really flows and the letters play off eachother very well. Keep it up!

    Tofe - Your throwie in that last picture is really really clean I guess the only advice I could give you there would be to scoot the O a little to the left because it feels like it should have a gap between it and the T in that one. And you're handstyle is good too just don't like the halo they almost never do it for me.
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    here goes...
    let me know if this is the wrong place...

    crits?

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    Quote Originally Posted by mekosbc View Post
    a couple of new things... that blue tag has been burn for 3 years now lol was shock when i seen it still up haha...and for the exchange with RESN its not finished but ill post it any way....










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    Kinda fucked up on everything.

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    blah double post
    Last edited by drums; 07-15-2010 at 09:55 PM.

  20. #102740

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    i just got into writing and these are the first few sketches i've done




    i know the drips suck on this, i'm gana try to do them more realistic next time

    and that is my first non-simple bubble/block letter sketches so can anyone give me some crit on my letter structure, i'm not too happy with it but i figured i'd throw it up since i have it

    and seeing as my handstyle is literally non-existent (i suuuck) the backgrounds are kinda empty but whatever just working on structure i guess


 

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