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    Quote Originally Posted by Zookyook View Post
    I think the N could use a lil bit of tweaking. The way the N is it kinda makes the A hard to read.

    Dope shit though.
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    thanks for all the crits yo... i did that one kinda fast but i learned from my mistakes and itll show in the next piece that i do that way... i hope

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    Aspek- nice and clean, I like it
    Rail- Really nice simples

    some new stuff, thinking of going with REKT instead of REK...

    throw sketch:


    and a sloppy simple pen sketch:


    Crits?
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheToy View Post
    Here's a couple simples I just filled in. I've got a couple more to color in. Just wanted to post something for now.

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    Some new stuff. Need to clean this shit lol


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    that says fresk right? the s on the first one is beast,k looks good but i think u should kick out the bottom right more,all the other letters dont looks bad but they need to still be played with,the bottom page f is sick and everything about the k is dope except at the top part of the k sticking out to the right

    Last edited by FlippingChickens; 07-12-2010 at 07:20 AM.

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    Thanks for crits Tofe.
    Yes,it says Fresk.
    I think you should add one more connection like between T an F, and your E looks like euro
    sign so I think you can use it and make one more sketch witch euro instead of E.

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    Ive tried to post a couple of my blackbook sketches and they arent appearing?

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    a couple of new things... that blue tag has been burn for 3 years now lol was shock when i seen it still up haha...and for the exchange with RESN its not finished but ill post it any way....










    Quote Originally Posted by B.S. POLICE View Post
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    And remember, you'll never progress if you don't paint. So paint. Even if it sucks. We learn from mistakes.

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    tryna get back in the groove.. buddy writes enlite, got too lazy and didnt finish the last "e"...



    tomorrow - nice flow, def dig the first one. but i dont like the R
    meko, 2nd flick i like, good proportions, thats something i'd like to see on a wall


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    fresk_ i like, feels like the top of the R on the first one need more definition
    tofe_ good progression anyway, your background splat is cool and well executed but focus on your letters
    meko_ i dog thsoe blue throws the most, keep on rockin it.


    latest thing im happy with, obviously needs color, etc but im just trying out these new ideas

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    meko your letters are nice but you need to work on your handstyles.your writes are like 4 or 5 months farther back in progression.may i suggest makeing your m's less like this m and more like this M.it would flow better with the rest of your letters in the tag.your trying to use a soft m with that hard k and it doesnt work well.just sayin you..



    are names are so similar i just thought id throw my .02 cents in there.i would show you what i was talking about but i dont have a printer at the moment haha.
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    Meko- I love your style dude its really sick, umm i think your throwie could use a little work
    Tofe- Quit all those extenstions and connections and dodads and try some simps

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    Kaz onee

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    tofe-that e is wack
    Meko-clean piece, that throwish piece with a cross in the O is sick, go paint that

    anyonefeelin this throwie?

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    ^the one across the bottom is tight

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    fuck you zen

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    slek - blue one is tight,but fix the e

    shem - that looks tight,but the only thing im not feelin is the 3d on the s going down the page so much,still it looks different and thats good,keep working with it..


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    tofe- for once i like it
    Quote Originally Posted by FlippingChickens View Post
    make this one a lowercase e, get rid of the tf connection and curve the f more to match the t

    on the second blue one lose the connection and make the e smaller and your good

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    5min simple ....tofe if you gave your self advice you would be better.


 

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