Blackbooks

[drums]

i just got into writing and these are the first few sketches i've done




i know the drips suck on this, i'm gana try to do them more realistic next time

and that is my first non-simple bubble/block letter sketches so can anyone give me some crit on my letter structure, i'm not too happy with it but i figured i'd throw it up since i have it

and seeing as my handstyle is literally non-existent (i suuuck) the backgrounds are kinda empty but whatever just working on structure i guess

[LeaksOne]

build off that shiller one. not the fill though or the ridiculous drips. keep it simple like that one. but tweak your E

[drOping]

I see the shiller having the most potential, try to clean it up a bit. I don't like how that E is so small on the Fate deal. I like the top part of the R on the last one. Keep em comin'

[drums]

thanks for the crits, i'm workin on my background for a piece right now cuz its just flowing out of me lol. i need to learn handstyle so bad tho...

[LeaksOne]

then stop doing pieces and focus on your handy. its essential.

[drums]

dbl post again

[drums]

not sure if this is the correct place to post this but i figured you guys might like peter griffin haha

and you can see how bad my handy practice is going in the background

[gumOnShoe]

Avoid using colors for now.
Don't worry about the fancy shit just yet.
Pencil.

[2FNK?]

Damn Meko, nice work.



I fucked up the coloring later on, so I'm just posting this.

The S and U suck.

[Meph*]

Meka1!- i like your letters and you tags, keep it up the only thing id say is the M on the yellow piece looks more like an N instead, maybe try and fix that.

Drums- the first peter and stewy came out wack but the second one is almost i dentical to the cartoon, keep at it



havnt posted in a while, got busy did this last week please crit, let me know if its creative or just weird..

[DieHippie]

jus a lone ranger tryna find where i belong .

[LeaksOne]

Damn Meko, nice work.



I fucked up the coloring later on, so I'm just posting this.

The S and U suck.

just the S and U? no sir. scrap the entire thing. make smooth lines not random jagged ones

[MDT]

my shit obviously not worth commentin on...

[idk401]

jus a lone ranger tryna find where i belong .

diggin the style , except for the over done extensions in the bottom.

[Sbal]

here goes...
let me know if this is the wrong place...

crits?

D looks like an O, or even an A at an angle... Work on straight keyboard letters before putting all those kinks in. No hate, but that's a lame fill, shoulda left it empty or went with a solid color. The D in your tag is to small in the hole but the legs go back over the M too far. Give crits to get them next time. Also, is MDT a crew or your initials? What's that all about.

[Get Rekt!]

crits please..

[iamBoZ96]

nice charater

[M3KA1!]

Meka1!- i like your letters and you tags, keep it up the only thing id say is the M on the yellow piece looks more like an N instead, maybe try and fix that.

Drums- the first peter and stewy came out wack but the second one is almost i dentical to the cartoon, keep at it



havnt posted in a while, got busy did this last week please crit, let me know if its creative or just weird..

Nah bruh that's Mekos werk. not mine. nonetheless very sexual

[mfatik88]

crits please

[iamBoZ96]

sum colorz would look dope on the bottom peice