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    Quote Originally Posted by GuyGuyer of Guyland View Post
    im just throwin in my 2 cents. but i feel more work could be put into the letters
    This. You need more structure.
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    cerz nice stuff

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    thanks bro

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    structures for conformists.
    I'll never paint that anyways..I wing it when I go out.

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    good start. color. some 3d, outlining. go into depth with the piece and see how it turns out

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    Cerz, I absolutely HATE that flower with the arrows
    Fuck off.

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    hahaha, why.. i dont know, i drew the flower for a friend and it was in my blackbook so i just tryed to give it the graffiti feel i guess

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    Some of my first attempts towards a simp.
    Sice- I like it.
    Sloth- Lose the hump on the side of the H and keep it like that. Restart everything else.
    If there is hope, it lies in the writers.

    Quote Originally Posted by testing. View Post
    Only one of them in my pics was a bathroom. I figured why not.
    And I'm so hardcore, the door didn't even have a lock on it.
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    the other day I saw a giant dick that someone painted across an entire fucknig house top to bottom, that was the shit.

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    sbal- try a capital A instead of a lower case on those throwies..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Loki X Sho View Post
    structures for conformists.
    I'll never paint that anyways..I wing it when I go out.
    Who the fuck are you?
    Your letters are WEAK. You just shunned some really solid advice on how to IMPROVE.
    ''blaahh blahh i don't want to be conformist and standard graffiti..''
    Guess what.. your work is STANDARD POOR TOY.
    There's nothin wrong with wantin to be different, but youre not and you never will be unless you take some constructive advice and improve your letters.

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    loki- listen to the crits. seriously

    i had real bad writers block recently so i took this pic and tried to design this around it without directly biting, apart from the a was a bit bitten.
    it actually helps a lot, way more than i thought actually


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    Thats so tight ^ go with that and itill get better.


    How are these simples looking?
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    even though i dont wanna admit but your shit is not as gay as it used to be but still gay.

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    the only thing that is close to that piece is the A which is pretty much bitten

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sbal View Post



    Some of my first attempts towards a simp.
    Sice- I like it.
    Sloth- Lose the hump on the side of the H and keep it like that. Restart everything else.
    Bottom page bump. and prea, what's wrong with using a lowercase a.
    If there is hope, it lies in the writers.

    Quote Originally Posted by testing. View Post
    Only one of them in my pics was a bathroom. I figured why not.
    And I'm so hardcore, the door didn't even have a lock on it.
    Quote Originally Posted by RMA View Post
    the other day I saw a giant dick that someone painted across an entire fucknig house top to bottom, that was the shit.

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    res4- that piece you started in the bottom i dig a lot, cant wait to see it fully colored.

    weakfingers- those letters look nice and simple, something easy that would look good on a wall ( the backwards R is cute)

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    weak- i prefer the first r and the second u, looking pretty good
    sbal- keep working on the orange one, make the l more pronounced for one thing
    meph- did anyone else notice the name on the brains, that was a god idea just need clean up a bit. and i will never finish it. i have no pens only biros and one red colouring pencil. im to ghetto for that shit

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    weak- lose the glitter

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    sbal- just fix it a little, just saying lowercase is a little harder to make work.. just keep at it.

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    thanks for the crit res4 and yeah i thought a throw up on the brain was mind-blowing too lol


 

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