Blackbooks

**Loki X Sho** · 07-17-2010 09:24 AM

blahhhh blah blah

Rasn, the second one is lookin spiffy

**GuyGuyer of Guyland** · 07-17-2010 09:55 AM

less extensions an thicken up the body for now. get rid of those arrow things on the bottom of your letters and bring the bars of the letters down more

**NosE2** · 07-17-2010 10:00 AM

i don't know if it's just me mfatik, but it looks like you bit the bottom one dude. you see the style in the one at the top then the one at the bottom? completely progressed and different. maybe not though. loki, diggin the fill.

**Loki X Sho** · 07-17-2010 10:06 AM

Originally Posted by GuyGuyer of Guyland

less extensions an thicken up the body for now. get rid of those arrow things on the bottom of your letters and bring the bars of the letters down more

in other words....conform to lame graff standards....Nahhhhhhh.
I like my weirdo extensions..without them it looks too normal.

and thanks nose...its mostly watercolor.

**CERZone** · 07-17-2010 11:06 AM

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**GuyGuyer of Guyland** · 07-17-2010 11:18 AM

Originally Posted by Loki X Sho

in other words....conform to lame graff standards....Nahhhhhhh.
I like my weirdo extensions..without them it looks too normal.

and thanks nose...its mostly watercolor.

im just throwin in my 2 cents. but i feel more work could be put into the letters

**Baron** · 07-17-2010 11:29 AM

Originally Posted by GuyGuyer of Guyland

im just throwin in my 2 cents. but i feel more work could be put into the letters

This. You need more structure.

**dubbed** · 07-17-2010 11:55 AM

cerz nice stuff

**CERZone** · 07-17-2010 11:59 AM

thanks bro

**Loki X Sho** · 07-17-2010 12:07 PM

structures for conformists.
I'll never paint that anyways..I wing it when I go out.

**dubbed** · 07-17-2010 12:11 PM

**CERZone** · 07-17-2010 01:33 PM

good start. color. some 3d, outlining. go into depth with the piece and see how it turns out

**LeaksOne** · 07-17-2010 01:53 PM

Cerz, I absolutely HATE that flower with the arrows

**CERZone** · 07-17-2010 01:58 PM

hahaha, why.. i dont know, i drew the flower for a friend and it was in my blackbook so i just tryed to give it the graffiti feel i guess

**Sbal** · 07-17-2010 02:20 PM

Some of my first attempts towards a simp.
Sice- I like it.
Sloth- Lose the hump on the side of the H and keep it like that. Restart everything else.

**PREA672** · 07-17-2010 02:36 PM

sbal- try a capital A instead of a lower case on those throwies..

**4HER** · 07-17-2010 02:49 PM

Originally Posted by Loki X Sho

structures for conformists.
I'll never paint that anyways..I wing it when I go out.

Who the fuck are you?
Your letters are WEAK. You just shunned some really solid advice on how to IMPROVE.
''blaahh blahh i don't want to be conformist and standard graffiti..''
Guess what.. your work is STANDARD POOR TOY.
There's nothin wrong with wantin to be different, but youre not and you never will be unless you take some constructive advice and improve your letters.

**RES4** · 07-17-2010 03:00 PM

loki- listen to the crits. seriously

i had real bad writers block recently so i took this pic and tried to design this around it without directly biting, apart from the a was a bit bitten.
it actually helps a lot, way more than i thought actually