Bottom page bump. and prea, what's wrong with using a lowercase a.Originally Posted by Sbal
Some of my first attempts towards a simp.
Sice- I like it.
Sloth- Lose the hump on the side of the H and keep it like that. Restart everything else.
Bottom page bump. and prea, what's wrong with using a lowercase a.
Some of my first attempts towards a simp.
Sice- I like it.
Sloth- Lose the hump on the side of the H and keep it like that. Restart everything else.
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
res4- that piece you started in the bottom i dig a lot, cant wait to see it fully colored.
weakfingers- those letters look nice and simple, something easy that would look good on a wall ( the backwards R is cute)
weak- i prefer the first r and the second u, looking pretty good
sbal- keep working on the orange one, make the l more pronounced for one thing
meph- did anyone else notice the name on the brains, that was a god idea just need clean up a bit. and i will never finish it. i have no pens only biros and one red colouring pencil. im to ghetto for that shit
weak- lose the glitter
sbal- just fix it a little, just saying lowercase is a little harder to make work.. just keep at it.
thanks for the crit res4 and yeah i thought a throw up on the brain was mind-blowing too lol
I like this. It's a cool concept. Would love to see it at a crazier angle though, rather than front on.
havnt posted in a while, got busy did this last week please crit, let me know if its creative or just weird..
Like, lookin at the guy more from above, really seein the brain spewing out towards you, drippin n shit..
you. calm down. why cant she do her own shit without you bustin out the insults? you dont NEED to like it. Loki do yer thang
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Originally Posted by Vagrant
Meka ur inta the tramping lifestyle? My opinion of you just went way up.
aspek u in chitown??? i cant see too much influence in ur sketch besides the A and the separate bar in the P... id like to see something from u that doesnt flare out at the bottom, like all ur letters always are thin on top and thick on the bottom, switch it up and maybe ull like what comes out...
loki i dont like the wonky arrow extensions... if u dont like typical graff u dont have to go out and paint any... ill admit when i started painting i wanted to rock pieces and ive painted AND sketched a few wack pieces, but once u get serious about wanting to develop ur own style, u realize that u haveta go simpler to progress faster..... its just better to practice with simpler letters if u want to progress into ur own style and not constantly put up stuff no one likes to see... im not saying conform, i never would, but starting with the basics is just part of the game
Meph- Maybe try placing the letters as more of a part of the brain rather than a tumor sticking out the side...other than that it looks cool
Sbal- try sketching keyborad letters using bars. If you need help with bars look at the new to graff thread.
weakfingers- That belongs on a wall. pleasing to the eyes.
Something I started for the Break battle, Only an outline for now b/c I might re-do it. The E, A, and K are alittle close because I started running out of page.
Should I add 3-D and fill? or Re-do it with better spacing? also advice on the letters would be nice.
crits?
Disclaimer: Contrary to popular belief I do not participate or condone any acts of graffiti or vandilisim
i dont like how the left leg of the A goes into the E
Fuck off.
the flower and background are fine but the arrows are uneccessary and ridiculous. ruins the whole thing for me.
Fuck off.
Yea I dont really like that either, but wanted to make sure I fit the K on the page and couldnt make it fit a better way that looked good. didnt feel like erasing the entire thing.
o well I decided to add 3d and a little color...
Last edited by nickstix; 07-18-2010 at 01:17 AM.
Disclaimer: Contrary to popular belief I do not participate or condone any acts of graffiti or vandilisim
loki i love you =]
ASPEK-Like always your stuff is really clean, and your structure is great, i dont like the p though
REDUX-I like those, Alot actually, bottom one in my opinion is definitly better
Nickstix- The thing goin on with the E and A kills the whole thing for me
TOFE-i still doesnt seem like your listening to the crits you get, 2nd picture last on is best work with that, but i love your throwie
SBAL-what can i say, just keep practicing, look at alot of photos of graff and practice
nothing has really changed while i have been gone, no one is really improving.
weakfingers and aspek are the only good ones.
Sorry. Didn't mean to rant/insult like I did.
But still, just fucks me off to see writers throwing away really good advice because they think they're much better than they are.
You're right, I don't NEED to like it. But if Loki is hoping to get real props from anyone on this site, she should probably at least be a bit more respectful about the help people are trying to give her.
By all means Loki, do what you want, dare to be different. But above all, aim to improve by any means necessary; even if you have to 'conform' a little bit for now.
future pice on the way
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