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    res4- that piece you started in the bottom i dig a lot, cant wait to see it fully colored.

    weakfingers- those letters look nice and simple, something easy that would look good on a wall ( the backwards R is cute)

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    weak- i prefer the first r and the second u, looking pretty good
    sbal- keep working on the orange one, make the l more pronounced for one thing
    meph- did anyone else notice the name on the brains, that was a god idea just need clean up a bit. and i will never finish it. i have no pens only biros and one red colouring pencil. im to ghetto for that shit

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    weak- lose the glitter

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    sbal- just fix it a little, just saying lowercase is a little harder to make work.. just keep at it.

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    thanks for the crit res4 and yeah i thought a throw up on the brain was mind-blowing too lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Meph* View Post


    havnt posted in a while, got busy did this last week please crit, let me know if its creative or just weird..
    I like this. It's a cool concept. Would love to see it at a crazier angle though, rather than front on.
    Like, lookin at the guy more from above, really seein the brain spewing out towards you, drippin n shit..

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    Quote Originally Posted by 4HER View Post
    Who the fuck are you?
    Your letters are WEAK. You just shunned some really solid advice on how to IMPROVE.
    ''blaahh blahh i don't want to be conformist and standard graffiti..''
    Guess what.. your work is STANDARD POOR TOY.
    There's nothin wrong with wantin to be different, but youre not and you never will be unless you take some constructive advice and improve your letters.
    you. calm down. why cant she do her own shit without you bustin out the insults? you dont NEED to like it. Loki do yer thang
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    aspek u in chitown??? i cant see too much influence in ur sketch besides the A and the separate bar in the P... id like to see something from u that doesnt flare out at the bottom, like all ur letters always are thin on top and thick on the bottom, switch it up and maybe ull like what comes out...

    loki i dont like the wonky arrow extensions... if u dont like typical graff u dont have to go out and paint any... ill admit when i started painting i wanted to rock pieces and ive painted AND sketched a few wack pieces, but once u get serious about wanting to develop ur own style, u realize that u haveta go simpler to progress faster..... its just better to practice with simpler letters if u want to progress into ur own style and not constantly put up stuff no one likes to see... im not saying conform, i never would, but starting with the basics is just part of the game

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    Meph- Maybe try placing the letters as more of a part of the brain rather than a tumor sticking out the side...other than that it looks cool

    Sbal- try sketching keyborad letters using bars. If you need help with bars look at the new to graff thread.

    weakfingers- That belongs on a wall. pleasing to the eyes.


    Something I started for the Break battle, Only an outline for now b/c I might re-do it. The E, A, and K are alittle close because I started running out of page.



    Should I add 3-D and fill? or Re-do it with better spacing? also advice on the letters would be nice.

    crits?
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    i dont like how the left leg of the A goes into the E
    Fuck off.

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    Quote Originally Posted by CERZone View Post
    hahaha, why.. i dont know, i drew the flower for a friend and it was in my blackbook so i just tryed to give it the graffiti feel i guess
    the flower and background are fine but the arrows are uneccessary and ridiculous. ruins the whole thing for me.
    Fuck off.

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    Quote Originally Posted by LeaksOne View Post
    i dont like how the left leg of the A goes into the E
    Yea I dont really like that either, but wanted to make sure I fit the K on the page and couldnt make it fit a better way that looked good. didnt feel like erasing the entire thing.

    o well I decided to add 3d and a little color...

    Last edited by nickstix; 07-18-2010 at 01:17 AM.
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    loki i love you =]
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    keep that kind fo stuff to yourself, no one wants to see two goth kids doing it
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    And remember, you'll never progress if you don't paint. So paint. Even if it sucks. We learn from mistakes.

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    ASPEK-Like always your stuff is really clean, and your structure is great, i dont like the p though
    REDUX-I like those, Alot actually, bottom one in my opinion is definitly better
    Nickstix- The thing goin on with the E and A kills the whole thing for me
    TOFE-i still doesnt seem like your listening to the crits you get, 2nd picture last on is best work with that, but i love your throwie
    SBAL-what can i say, just keep practicing, look at alot of photos of graff and practice

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    nothing has really changed while i have been gone, no one is really improving.

    weakfingers and aspek are the only good ones.
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    Quote Originally Posted by M3KA1! View Post
    you. calm down. why cant she do her own shit without you bustin out the insults? you dont NEED to like it. Loki do yer thang
    Sorry. Didn't mean to rant/insult like I did.
    But still, just fucks me off to see writers throwing away really good advice because they think they're much better than they are.
    You're right, I don't NEED to like it. But if Loki is hoping to get real props from anyone on this site, she should probably at least be a bit more respectful about the help people are trying to give her.
    By all means Loki, do what you want, dare to be different. But above all, aim to improve by any means necessary; even if you have to 'conform' a little bit for now.

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    future pice on the way

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    ... crits... after all i am a toy... no shit
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