zooyook, i wouldnt of joined the 'E' and 'R' i dont think it looks right, but that's my opinion,
also not sure about the wavey part of the 'O' it dosent fit in with the rest i also feel
that's a piece of my anme i worked on, took em a couple of hrs, and i'd like peoples ideas on it
yo leaks.... thats y i like this site cause people straight out say "u suck"... it makes ya wanna get better... hearin "your good" makes ya cocky an makes u feel like a piece of shit when u know u suck... kids in ma grade think this skaterkid is tha bomb an i suck... the kid bites of some internet base wildstyle horribly an cant even make block letters himself... i do suck, but atleast i aint as bad as him...
@ashis, u missed the 3D at bottom of the right stick of the 'A' and you only ahve one over lapping letter, (the 'K' on the 'i') either overlap them all or non and work on your forcefield
@sezer what is that 3rd letter, im guessing it's a 'Y' check your 3D at aprts it's off
@both of you
mabey add some shines, or blocks, or char's, build it up a lil now, slowley tho
i be exspressing to my full capabilities,
now im living in correctional facilities
the initial 'M' is fresh i like it, needs more to it tho, fill it and give it shadow, just mess with it,
the 2nd 'MEVSR' is ok, i feel their is sumthing missing, or heirs something about it, but i cant put my finger to it
the throwies are ok, i'd work on them tho, and i dont like the open 'M' on the last one dosent look right :/
Last edited by LeaksOne; 07-22-2010 at 12:15 AM.
Whats a fukin simple looks pretty simple to me lol!
yeah simply bad.
if you really need instructions on how to do simples head to your local wal-mart, go straight to the kids section, go to the books and pick out your favorite letter book.
simple...got rlly bored an decided to add shitty extras.... ...bad lighting = orange paper...
fuck sony an their batteries that dont charge...the flick was rushed 2
NOW your on the right track. get that down to get a good feel/understanding of your letters then slowly start adding your own steez. and i mean SLOWLY
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