the u looks like a w
the u looks like a w
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
Originally Posted by testing.
Hmm. I see what you mean.
I should have put it closer to the B so the link wasnt so wide.
Poo!
I dont do illegal work. Anything illegal done with my designs has been copied without my permission.
Tace: I like the 3rd one, myb if u did it thicker and in some ill 3D instead of the point perspective thing? 2nd one's nice.
Dank: Nice one, colors are awesome
Ronathon: Like your stuff
Last edited by RaveCat; 08-04-2010 at 08:06 PM. Reason: damn spellin'
[URL=http://img713.imageshack.us/i/chad200001.jpg/][/URL
Uploaded with ImageShack.us
an exchange battle i did with romik crits?
i know its a lil dirty and u can see pencil but crit everything but that haha
Can I pls have some crits on these, started going more simple.
Give crits to get crits
I dont do illegal work. Anything illegal done with my designs has been copied without my permission.
idk thats what i would go for....just a rough idea though
Last edited by NosE2; 08-05-2010 at 01:26 PM.
2 different effects and 2 different E's. Basically same style tho.
Crits???
Sake - I like that background on the first one, but you should try to keep all the bars the same width and space out the K and E more cuz they are kinda hard to read.
wwillis try to fix that shaky hand and when u kinda mess up go over it again to make the lines smoother
sake try making the E more spaced out instead of it being nehind the k i like everything except for the last 2 letters
crits?
Last edited by Stigma02; 08-05-2010 at 04:29 PM.
hey stigma that sketch is pretty cool but heres my 2cents...
1. i dont really like that effect that covers all those parts of your letters
2. it definitely needs color maybe adding it to the effect or letters would change my mind about liking the effect.
3. it would look a lot cooler and flow more if you made all the ends of the letters flow at the same direction if you know what i mean? like the left leg of the R, the left leg of the M, the bottom of the I, the bottom right leg of the K. idk if you understand me but make them all go to like one point instead of the left leg of the R going completely sideways and the right leg of the K going twords the bottom middle of the page.
4. im not feelin the middle part of the M idk try somethin different.
But idk thats my opinion but ur bubbles drips and 3d look great man keep it up
i'm gonna be the one to call this one?I liked it better inverted. The fill still sucks, but I'd like some crits on my outline more than the fill.
Kane- I'm digging your throws. And I like the A in your straight letter, but the rest isn't working for me.
OhSnap bite
A and P forsure, the attempt at his colouring style is a giveaway
looks pretty generic to me..
did you use white out to cover up your mistakes???........ thats a big No No!!an exchange battle i did with romik crits?
i know its a lil dirty and u can see pencil but crit everything but that haha
Sake: Looks rly cool, but i don't like the extensions on the top S n E, idk myb they're little 2 long? Or changing the directions and position of one o them? Just doesn't flow for me... I like the bottom one, dough.
Stigma: I like the letters, just myb crowded bit? Myb loosing some of the effects?
Crits? Besides the horrible pen control (:
hey guys havent p[osted shit in a il min so this is wut i got backe up in my books alot of poop but crits would be nice
and no i didnt set them blunt raps up liek that i juss whent threw and to picks of every page in my book
Last edited by woonybomber; 08-06-2010 at 10:47 AM.
How the fuck are you gonna call a bite on that shit? It's a god damn straight letter. Fucking retard...
Everyone in here has to do SIMPLES.
If I was trying to color a piece like oh snap, there would be about 10 more colors. As far as the lettering, it's basic two or three bar structure with some very light extensions, not exactly a style you can pinpoint to one person....
But whatever, if you want to call it a bite, I really don't care. It's a piece I'm probably not going to develop anyway, so it ends with that sketch.
Posting Permissions
Reply With Quote
Bookmarks