Give crits to get crits
Give crits to get crits
I dont do illegal work. Anything illegal done with my designs has been copied without my permission.
2 different effects and 2 different E's. Basically same style tho.
Sake - I like that background on the first one, but you should try to keep all the bars the same width and space out the K and E more cuz they are kinda hard to read.
wwillis try to fix that shaky hand and when u kinda mess up go over it again to make the lines smoother
sake try making the E more spaced out instead of it being nehind the k i like everything except for the last 2 letters
Last edited by Stigma02; 08-05-2010 at 05:29 PM.
hey stigma that sketch is pretty cool but heres my 2cents...
1. i dont really like that effect that covers all those parts of your letters
2. it definitely needs color maybe adding it to the effect or letters would change my mind about liking the effect.
3. it would look a lot cooler and flow more if you made all the ends of the letters flow at the same direction if you know what i mean? like the left leg of the R, the left leg of the M, the bottom of the I, the bottom right leg of the K. idk if you understand me but make them all go to like one point instead of the left leg of the R going completely sideways and the right leg of the K going twords the bottom middle of the page.
4. im not feelin the middle part of the M idk try somethin different.
But idk thats my opinion but ur bubbles drips and 3d look great man keep it up
looks pretty generic to me..
Sake: Looks rly cool, but i don't like the extensions on the top S n E, idk myb they're little 2 long? Or changing the directions and position of one o them? Just doesn't flow for me... I like the bottom one, dough.
Stigma: I like the letters, just myb crowded bit? Myb loosing some of the effects?
Crits? Besides the horrible pen control (:
hey guys havent p[osted shit in a il min so this is wut i got backe up in my books alot of poop but crits would be nice
and no i didnt set them blunt raps up liek that i juss whent threw and to picks of every page in my book
Last edited by woonybomber; 08-06-2010 at 11:47 AM.
But whatever, if you want to call it a bite, I really don't care. It's a piece I'm probably not going to develop anyway, so it ends with that sketch.
im trying to find a new name. Royal just doesnt work for me. I was thinking of rote. My best letters are a,r,e,o so im trying to think of names with those letterrs any suggestions?
its looking like a whole new batch of toys. people learn straight letters, lose the random bends and twist and learn the basics. ARROWS ARE BADDD!!!!
this guy makes me roflcopter