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    stigma, not bad..the s on the jason aint that good, the re on the revin is horrible i first read ke but it could be anything. try different second outlines, yours just dont pop.

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    ok like put like a thick bright outline around it?

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    Stigma, its looking pretty good, try to clean up your lines a bit and work on your tags.



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    Stigma: love the e on your kevin, and both look sweet to me,

    To bladdered to finish colouring coz my team won, but any ideas on colours for the rest of this? Tried to cut down on the cracks as per leaks advise, so filled it up with randomness to see what fits best,

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    dangeri- you support liverpool? you dont need to make the e look the same as the a. if both letters were capital it would look way better
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    Yeah man, tis wer am from, we shoulda won by 6! an I have been tryna make em a little different by dropping the a off to the left middle, but I'll go with caps next time around an see wer that takes me, cheers. Wer bouts in n Ireland u from?

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    Crits?

    Old as fuck sketch.

    It reads bounce by the way.
    Last edited by anti803; 08-19-2010 at 06:15 PM. Reason: left something out

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    there comes a time when people learn arrows arent everything

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    anti - it looks like one of those ink blotches that the psychiatrist will ask you "and what does this remind you of" Lose the arrows, give your letters some structure (lose all those connections)

    Looking at the letters it seems like they might have some style if you drew them out using bars instead of melted wax. Can we maybe see those letters drawn out individually? or at least simple like?

    awe - for colors maybe a yellow/yellow fill, or a lighter orange/yellow. I like the piercings on the W. I dont like how you made the hole on the e look like a j, you should have made the hole in the a an actual hole if you are gonna make the e an actual hole

    Chad - Nice work, i like the D the most

    Stigma - the Jason is way better, I dont like the S though, its too square. You have a rounded J and O (even your A and N are slightly round), and your 3D is off on the N

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    some rank peaces

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    U a Rangers man RES4?

    Dangeri - Im a liverpool fan too. I like the idea of your piece, i'd concentrate more on the individual letters because i like the whole broken/cracked idea and the 3d looks good, so i'd just concentrate on making the letters right, just my opinon though.

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    U a Rangers man RES4?

    Dangeri - Im a liverpool fan too. I like the idea of your piece, i'd concentrate more on the individual letters because i like the whole broken/cracked idea and the 3d looks good, so i'd just concentrate on making the letters right, just my opinon though.

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    Can i get crits on my letters on these? I dont need crits on my outlines or my colours because I know I fucked up on those.




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    Willis Go simple and try making your bars less boxy.

    Crittssss?

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    Rhek, i like your piece, maybe make the E thinker and make the top bar on the K a little bigger

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gatsoi View Post
    Willis Go simple and try making your bars less boxy.

    Crittssss?
    The R is hot. Make the part that connects the two downward lines in the H skinny to match the skinny line in the R. The E just looks out of place and bad. It needs to be much thicker except you could make the middle straight left to right skinny to keep the theme going. The k looks good except for the line that is like / Make that one thicker and leave the rest the same.

    I know thats a lot of crits but I do like it.
    Last edited by ShutYourEyes; 08-20-2010 at 01:10 PM.

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    Thanks guys.

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    How's this?

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    you draw really slow. and the E is entirely too skinny. and i dont really like your R. but thats just me
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    Willis, almost every letter needs work bud. Bar thickness is all over the place
    Lose the extension on the w and just concentrate on making your letter bars the same width. Should even drop the 3d to be honest unitl you sort your structure out a bit .


 

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