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    Quote Originally Posted by SicK- View Post
    i honestly draw WAY better when im high
    same here man

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    made this one yesterday

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    dnt write dusk

    crits besides the j being a lil wider then the other letters

    say jason

    says kevin
    i know the handies suck on the green piece
    Last edited by Stigma02; 08-19-2010 at 07:12 AM.

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    crits? its a little sloppy i know.


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    Quote Originally Posted by 3Cr1k7 View Post
    crits? its a little sloppy i know.

    Nice 3D, but work on your highlights and lettering.

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    stigma, not bad..the s on the jason aint that good, the re on the revin is horrible i first read ke but it could be anything. try different second outlines, yours just dont pop.

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    ok like put like a thick bright outline around it?

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    Stigma, its looking pretty good, try to clean up your lines a bit and work on your tags.



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    Stigma: love the e on your kevin, and both look sweet to me,

    To bladdered to finish colouring coz my team won, but any ideas on colours for the rest of this? Tried to cut down on the cracks as per leaks advise, so filled it up with randomness to see what fits best,

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    dangeri- you support liverpool? you dont need to make the e look the same as the a. if both letters were capital it would look way better
    Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one

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    Yeah man, tis wer am from, we shoulda won by 6! an I have been tryna make em a little different by dropping the a off to the left middle, but I'll go with caps next time around an see wer that takes me, cheers. Wer bouts in n Ireland u from?

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    Crits?

    Old as fuck sketch.

    It reads bounce by the way.
    Last edited by anti803; 08-19-2010 at 06:15 PM. Reason: left something out

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    there comes a time when people learn arrows arent everything

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    anti - it looks like one of those ink blotches that the psychiatrist will ask you "and what does this remind you of" Lose the arrows, give your letters some structure (lose all those connections)

    Looking at the letters it seems like they might have some style if you drew them out using bars instead of melted wax. Can we maybe see those letters drawn out individually? or at least simple like?

    awe - for colors maybe a yellow/yellow fill, or a lighter orange/yellow. I like the piercings on the W. I dont like how you made the hole on the e look like a j, you should have made the hole in the a an actual hole if you are gonna make the e an actual hole

    Chad - Nice work, i like the D the most

    Stigma - the Jason is way better, I dont like the S though, its too square. You have a rounded J and O (even your A and N are slightly round), and your 3D is off on the N

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    some rank peaces

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    U a Rangers man RES4?

    Dangeri - Im a liverpool fan too. I like the idea of your piece, i'd concentrate more on the individual letters because i like the whole broken/cracked idea and the 3d looks good, so i'd just concentrate on making the letters right, just my opinon though.

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    U a Rangers man RES4?

    Dangeri - Im a liverpool fan too. I like the idea of your piece, i'd concentrate more on the individual letters because i like the whole broken/cracked idea and the 3d looks good, so i'd just concentrate on making the letters right, just my opinon though.

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    Can i get crits on my letters on these? I dont need crits on my outlines or my colours because I know I fucked up on those.




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    Willis Go simple and try making your bars less boxy.

    Crittssss?

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    Rhek, i like your piece, maybe make the E thinker and make the top bar on the K a little bigger


 

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