Rhek, i like your piece, maybe make the E thinker and make the top bar on the K a little bigger
Rhek, i like your piece, maybe make the E thinker and make the top bar on the K a little bigger
The R is hot. Make the part that connects the two downward lines in the H skinny to match the skinny line in the R. The E just looks out of place and bad. It needs to be much thicker except you could make the middle straight left to right skinny to keep the theme going. The k looks good except for the line that is like / Make that one thicker and leave the rest the same.Originally Posted by Gatsoi
Willis Go simple and try making your bars less boxy.
Crittssss?
I know thats a lot of crits but I do like it.
Last edited by ShutYourEyes; 08-20-2010 at 01:10 PM.
Thanks guys.
How's this?
you draw really slow. and the E is entirely too skinny. and i dont really like your R. but thats just me
Fuck off.
Willis, almost every letter needs work bud. Bar thickness is all over the place
Lose the extension on the w and just concentrate on making your letter bars the same width. Should even drop the 3d to be honest unitl you sort your structure out a bit .
Rhek, not really feeling that one. I think the bottom of the R and K need some work, seems too fat to me.
There is a bright orange outline around the whole thing but it didnt show up on the scan, any crits?
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your stuff consistently looks better chad, only thing i would change on that is the lower part of the h bud. for some reason that seems out of place to me
Chad-I would throw a splash or 3d to clean up some empty space, its too white behind that H.
Messin with letters, Can i get some crits on my letters
aint noone said shit so im gonna,
work on purportions, stick simple and your on tha right track.
my advice is keep doin what your doin just mind that purportions yo.
i dont usually do this shit but its 4am in the mornin' and i cant sleep.
if you wanna know anymore pm me er some shit some time.
this, k. straight up get a big jacket and a belt doggie. dont pay that shit its stupid expensive for one, and the majority of the cameras are fake/not being watched, IF they are, they cant legally chase you past their property. ive been chased, dont stop run. WORST case senario you get caught its theft under your gonna be fine. to sum it up, RACK IT. save your self alot of money, resecesion is a bitch.
get creative, racking is easy. dont walk in all G'd out. you'll attract attention, sounds stupid but its true. dont rock tha hat and pull yo' fuckin pants up. haha jus some advice yo.
chad im always diggin your fills
Willis - Atm keep your bar width the same, you can especially see that with the T.
Rhek - (for the newest piece posted) I think the h would look better if you tapered the bottom edges off like youve done on the r and k.
Chad - im agreeing with boomslang on the h, altough i can see why you put it there. never the less sick.
made this today
Added colour
Crits?
awe- thats sick but make the hole in the a consistent with the rest, lose the ring things on the w, flip the extention on the bottom of the a so its more symmetrical, and work on the top right section of the e. its sick tho
chad- make the green fill more consistent, i.e a pattern throughout
We're a comedic duo. like Barack Obama and Will Smith
heres some of my recent shit, just been tryin random words...almost
and this next one the ink leaked the fuck out on the page, it was rather brutal..lol
chad: you're the only one i like on this page, throw a drop shadow and a force field around it and you'll be set.
Last edited by BlacktodaFuture; 08-21-2010 at 05:04 PM.
chad-thats pretty dope
crits?
theres more but im still workin on em. feels good to have internet again
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