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    Quote Originally Posted by Cyto Aka Son1c View Post
    That line across the middle ruined it

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    Quote Originally Posted by leaksone View Post
    gatsoi, why do you keep posting the exact same letters?
    lmao!!
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    smoker those last two have got to be the best style ive ever seen. if i was walking through town and saw that on glass window id shit myself and take a pic

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    Alright finally I get to post a pic not on the bottom of the page. anyways here it is. kinda made some mistakes when inking it, then tried to correct those mistakes but made them worse... eh oh well.


    oh and that's not my tag, I was just trying different shit out.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gatsoi View Post

    Waste- Bring the outline closer to the letters and use alot less bubbles. Try and make the S flow
    resk - i like the 3d
    Kew1- I reallyyy like the E in the first piece, the fill is nice too.
    Deser- Sick!
    Juice- I like that style, It reminds me of ESKiMO2
    Your dropshadow sucks man... The best example is the E, but its different on every letter.. just on the E its like 3 different shadows.

    Your R is an A with a chunk missing.

    The H is just.... there actually not much wrong with the H, its just got no style. On second thought make the middle bar bigga

    The E

    The K looks like a dude about to karate chop something in half, now thats pretty cool but i doubt everyone will see that like i did. Make the arm of the dude karate chopping way bigger, so it wont look like an arm anymore.

    And dont do that shine

    Quote Originally Posted by ShutYourEyes View Post
    That line across the middle ruined it
    Didnt even see the line till you said something about it, wierd...
    Last edited by PermanentMarkers; 08-23-2010 at 08:06 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ChadOne View Post
    Every letter looks real good individually.

    could maaaaybe overlap the HAD a tad more, feels like the CH is overlapped more. But i'm only saying that as a crit to justify this bump

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    Quote Originally Posted by PermanentMarkers View Post
    Every letter looks real good individually.

    could maaaaybe overlap the HAD a tad more, feels like the CH is overlapped more. But i'm only saying that as a crit to justify this bump
    i wouldnt do that, by doing so hed kill the only little space left between the letters. id rather cut down on the bottom c, id like to see a close to mirroed d c.

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    you finaly got your 3d down werd juss work on them add ons now
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    crits?

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    I would leave the bottom of the first t without an extension and where is the 3d on the right side of the last t?

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    prea the first T isnt that bad, just doesnt match the second one so its out of place... the A looks weird with the extension on the bottom, and the last T has some 3d covering the S, fix that and itll be a clean simp

    bek exchange (APES)

    crits wanted...

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    i didnt match them on purpose

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    Quote Originally Posted by SicK- View Post
    Juice- love that stuff, real clean and tight letters
    Prea-Wrong thread homie, but that handy is pretty dope
    Blacktodafuture- Umm i cant make out some of those letters lol, work on that the fill is clean though
    Deser- Nice fillls and letters homie
    Weak- Good shit little to busy though
    rhek- Your bars are crazy wobbly make em straight and try not to round ever edge. You need to start working n some new styles cuz your not progressing much.
    Bottom page bump
    and Prea i guess you liked my T i used in our battle?


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    huh i didnt even notice, i just draw what comes to my mind, guess that came to my mind.. but totally did muff up the 3d on the right T

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    Quote Originally Posted by lord_plankton View Post
    i wouldnt do that, by doing so hed kill the only little space left between the letters. id rather cut down on the bottom c, id like to see a close to mirroed d c.
    Agreed, making the bottom smaller is way better idea.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Juicee View Post
    just put a scrap paper under the paper you're drawing on lol np
    HAHA! no I meant it bled out into the weave of the paper not actually through, I use a piece of foam board underneath. Do you just use a standard sketch paper?

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    Zook, your letters are getting worse, man..

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    Kew1, they look pretty good but i would lose some of the extensions on that E.



    Fucked up the C, its a bit too skinny, and I played around with the A.

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    kew your shit looks so much better than when you first posted here.
    chad i dont like the top of the a but other than that everything else is lookin sharp

    i got bored so i made this


    most of the drop shadow is probably fucked up and i chicken scratch-freestyled it haha
    i dont condone illegal activity, anything i post on bombingscience is a lie.


 

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