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    Quote Originally Posted by ChadOne View Post
    Kew1, they look pretty good but i would lose some of the extensions on that E.



    Fucked up the C, its a bit too skinny, and I played around with the A.

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    Now thats what i mean!! looks fresh beside what you already pointed out. i might bend the left bar of h a little more torwards the right. the seem to spread a lil. thats just me. oh you might want to lift up the c a bit or lower the d. real good anyways. solid simple all the way.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phillip McDougall View Post
    Zook, your letters are getting worse, man..
    hah i fuckin KNOW! i had this sketch sitting around uncolored for almost a month, it needed a lot of work but i just said fuck it and colored it.... i try to go simpler but i just wanna give the shit too much style all at once and my skill cant handle that shit... any specifics on what looks good and what i shouldnt do?

    so im bumpin for some detailed crits, i know some things like the A and P should be completely scrapped lol, but i kinda liked part of the E and part of the S...

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    it does read apes!!!! i was like how does it read bek, no fuckin way..alright good for you.
    id say get away from those excessively connected letters. go simpler, uniform , dont squash your letters that much give em room. i extremely hate those thin parts.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zookyook View Post
    hah i fuckin KNOW! i had this sketch sitting around uncolored for almost a month, it needed a lot of work but i just said fuck it and colored it.... i try to go simpler but i just wanna give the shit too much style all at once and my skill cant handle that shit... any specifics on what looks good and what i shouldnt do?
    http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4096/...d17b18e8_z.jpg
    so im bumpin for some detailed crits, i know some things like the A and P should be completely scrapped lol, but i kinda liked part of the E and part of the S...
    Didnt even think it was letters to start with until lord_plankton said it was "apes". Seriously insane stuff besides from I couldnt read it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zookyook View Post
    go simpler
    You should definitely do that (go simpler).
    That APES just looks like a few bars with mad swiggley bars.
    They don't even look like letters. The only letter that's even remotely readable is the S.

    Look dude, your color, your shine effects are spot on, but them' letters yo'....

    I told you the same shit like 2months ago, and it's only gotten worse since then.
    ...

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    I like it, s maybe a little out of proportion, but that's got some funk!

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    started a new book, first page. personally I think its shit but crits pls
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zookyook View Post
    hah i fuckin KNOW! i had this sketch sitting around uncolored for almost a month, it needed a lot of work but i just said fuck it and colored it.... i try to go simpler but i just wanna give the shit too much style all at once and my skill cant handle that shit... any specifics on what looks good and what i shouldnt do?

    so im bumpin for some detailed crits, i know some things like the A and P should be completely scrapped lol, but i kinda liked part of the E and part of the S...
    i think you gotta look at this style like you would with a kid with autism
    i know because im kind of the same way
    the thing that seems to lack the most in my opinion are some of your bars
    the e seems to get a little too squished and skinny
    and same with the s
    you dont have to crunch your letters to get rid of negative space
    thats what extensions are for
    if you gave it some better structure but kept your style i think you'll end up light years past other people
    you've found you own style
    now you just have to be comfortable with it you know

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    crits... really bored so i decide to make an old school game character

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    Mech Warriors was so fuckin awesome
    If there is hope, it lies in the writers.

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    Only one of them in my pics was a bathroom. I figured why not.
    And I'm so hardcore, the door didn't even have a lock on it.
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    the other day I saw a giant dick that someone painted across an entire fucknig house top to bottom, that was the shit.

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    bump the last two posts!!!! mech warriorsss!!!

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    much appreciated crits people... i can definitely see where ur all coming from, and that was a pretty weak piece but i still thought it was at least intermediate, but i guess the mods opinions matters most... to whoever deleted my shit from the int. thread fuck you again...

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    its better than most of the shite in that thread

    the ap is good, the es is a bit too much i think. just keep working on it and it will get a lot better, some people just dont like it because its different, some people want everybody to do simples forever and never do something like that. if you keep pushing yourself and doing something different it will definately get way better
    Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one

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    ok so what am i if they are 10 times better :/ ?
    SoZ-Ni

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    the fuck you on about?
    Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one

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    edit
    Last edited by SECH; 08-26-2010 at 01:52 PM.

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    ....BIT.... got your first fan


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    holy shit thats a direct bite haha
    Fuck off.

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    Oh fuck that was late

    Oh and lmao at that bite, thats fucking hilarious
    Last edited by <[(Smokers187二S上M)]>; 08-26-2010 at 01:34 PM.
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    smoker those last two have got to be the best style ive ever seen. if i was walking through town and saw that on glass window id shit myself and take a pic


 

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