needs some work but meh im trying
needs some work but meh im trying
Dropping I think what you could do is,connect the "K" to the "E" at the top where the extension comes off of the "e" and lose the extension on the "K" that connects the vertical bar to the arm bar kinda makes it look like an "R" if you get me also lose the connection from the "E" to the "K"...I was gonna draw it but you can probably get what I'm going on about. hope that helps
Originally Posted by Gyse
How should i color the rest?
Thanks I get what ur sayin...I feel that extention on the top of the K ruined it, I think Im gonna rework that whole thing...to much homework right now tho.
Meko - your shit is amazing, really liking it, keep it up.
Tofe - That arrow in the T comes form nowhere, not one of your best.
Slek - Apart from the arrow at the top of the S on your 3rd piece I think its great.
Smokers187 - That piece is the bomb, I like the whole thing.
Scam - Really like this, maybe make the middle of the S a bit thicker.
This is my first piece in a while
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Good job Willis, looks better then your other stuff. I think if the wil are going to be connected at the bottom, then the s should connect with it too, instead of going behind the l. Also work on the bars in the W.
Spade, you're good at art, but you have a very wack tag. I'm going to say try to simplify your letters a little, cause those could be dope pieces if they were more controlled. Those characters are insane though, good job.
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
Thanks for the crit Sbal
Spade, like the characters, cant really read any of the letters though, but if your that good at art then it shouldnt be too difficult for you.
just finished this piece
wils- I'm not that good at giving crit but i'll try. I love the 3d, i think the bottom part of the W should be thicker? It might be your style but idk.
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Wils really diggin the structure on the first a lot and the 3D on the second is extra dopeskii
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Oh yas and spade I like the first one man sick mask/char
smokers- I like the detailed forcefield.
spade- I've been watching you on deviant for a while haha.
first piece i have put on here plan on more to come
but what u think
Exi- Haha really? small world man
Sbal- Thanks, on my upcoming work ill try to make it more consistent and controlled.
Exi- Haha really? small world man
Sbal- Thanks, on my upcoming work ill try to make it more consistent and controlled.
exitus, what does that even say?
willis, keep working on those simps and try to steady your hand.
spade, simps.
smokers, im not completely sure what that says but i like the concept.
dank, your R's are still akward looking and the add-ons on the top of them is pointless. makes them look like retarded B's.
Fuck off.
jus some ish i did last night b4 i passed out.
King With Out A Crown - Big Krit
Leaks it says smoke mang
Dank-that eye is clean as fluck man proprs
im having trouble identifying the S and E.
Fuck off.
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