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    Good job Willis, looks better then your other stuff. I think if the wil are going to be connected at the bottom, then the s should connect with it too, instead of going behind the l. Also work on the bars in the W.
    Spade, you're good at art, but you have a very wack tag. I'm going to say try to simplify your letters a little, cause those could be dope pieces if they were more controlled. Those characters are insane though, good job.
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    Thanks for the crit Sbal

    Spade, like the characters, cant really read any of the letters though, but if your that good at art then it shouldnt be too difficult for you.

    just finished this piece


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    wils- I'm not that good at giving crit but i'll try. I love the 3d, i think the bottom part of the W should be thicker? It might be your style but idk.

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    Wils really diggin the structure on the first a lot and the 3D on the second is extra dopeskii
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    whenever i see smokers' screenname i think of a crayon thats sharpened on both ends
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    smoker those last two have got to be the best style ive ever seen. if i was walking through town and saw that on glass window id shit myself and take a pic

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    DOUBLE POST MUTHAFUCKAZ

    Oh yas and spade I like the first one man sick mask/char
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    whenever i see smokers' screenname i think of a crayon thats sharpened on both ends
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    smoker those last two have got to be the best style ive ever seen. if i was walking through town and saw that on glass window id shit myself and take a pic

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    smokers- I like the detailed forcefield.

    spade- I've been watching you on deviant for a while haha.

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    first piece i have put on here plan on more to come
    but what u think




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    Exi- Haha really? small world man
    Sbal- Thanks, on my upcoming work ill try to make it more consistent and controlled.

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    Exi- Haha really? small world man
    Sbal- Thanks, on my upcoming work ill try to make it more consistent and controlled.

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    exitus, what does that even say?

    willis, keep working on those simps and try to steady your hand.

    spade, simps.

    smokers, im not completely sure what that says but i like the concept.

    dank, your R's are still akward looking and the add-ons on the top of them is pointless. makes them look like retarded B's.
    Fuck off.

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    jus some ish i did last night b4 i passed out.

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    Leaks it says smoke mang
    Dank-that eye is clean as fluck man proprs
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    whenever i see smokers' screenname i think of a crayon thats sharpened on both ends
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    smoker those last two have got to be the best style ive ever seen. if i was walking through town and saw that on glass window id shit myself and take a pic

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    im having trouble identifying the S and E.
    Fuck off.

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    you may need to practice simps. thats really akward
    Fuck off.

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    yeah, you're right, and i suck at 3d, i suck at drop shadows. anyone got any tips for practicing that?

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    risk: your R's and S is clean. but im not digging the I.
    hork: the top one is alright. the bottom one... im not to fond of.
    kno: you letters r weird. go simp. do straight letters.



    i fucked up a lot but it still looks alright i think.
    critz.
    SURGEone.

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    Quote Originally Posted by exitus View Post

    needs some work but meh im trying
    bump

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    try to get the widths of ur letters the same. the s and the e seem like they go together and the urg is together but they dont flow with fat letters and then ur skinny letters pick one and stick to it crits plzz

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    Quote Originally Posted by exitus View Post
    bump
    Quote Originally Posted by LeaksOne View Post
    exitus, what does that even say?
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    Fuck off.


 

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