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    Quote Originally Posted by down! View Post
    yeah, you're right, and i suck at 3d, i suck at drop shadows. anyone got any tips for practicing that?
    try doin a thick out line.. once you have done your out line wrapp the out side of your letters to make them wider...

    example:
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    Repetition is key. Memorize that shit. Then paint it.
    And remember, you'll never progress if you don't paint. So paint. Even if it sucks. We learn from mistakes.

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    meko thats nice and simple

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    astro:1st one is garbage 2nd one has some flow to about the t that looks likes a y try to get ur bars same width ur t only has sharp angles not much round on it as opposed to the other letters

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    oh and astro ur R doesnt fit in at all with that piece handy is pretty sick tho, CRITS!
    Last edited by Stigma02; 09-18-2010 at 04:42 PM.

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    Stigma- I take it that says atone? if so here are my thoughts...
    The overall sense of flow is good, it seems symetric. But I think the structure is lacking. The middle bar of the A is too much make it smaller and not overlapping the right bar of the A. I don't get why there is like a middle horizontal bar thing in the middle of your T, thats wack. The bar in the middle of the O is...not cool. Middle bar of the E is wack too. Take your time clean up things, its just overall sloppy. But hey its a cool idea, rework it.

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    alright ill clean it up thx

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    and the tags suck too, it would of looked better without them.
    http://s883.photobucket.com/home/smokeitup421/index

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    crits.id give them but i cant see anypics.i assume if i did i would tell you to keep practicing.because thats all i can say.
    -meko.yours is the only one i can see.keep doin what your doin.shit looks dope.



    just fucking around while coughin up a lung.
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    Romero... he speaks the truth.

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    Meko- Good shit! Lovin that style, keep it up.
    Tofe- The drop shadow's a bit messy, the top bar on the T is a little wacked imo and not really feeling the O either. The throwie's pretty nice though and so is the 3D.
    Stigma and Astro- Letter structure...work on it...
    Romero- Not too bad the curves on the S and the U seem a bit necessary though.



    SEAZ finally got something with more than just SE or SZ lol I've been having a hard time with my A's with any style I've worked on but I like this one. Any thoughts? Oh and the outline's only blue/black because its a blue marker over the orange lol...
    SEAZ

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    the thread needed a lil boost
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    those new tupac shakuras are dope.
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    chocolate milk is amazing.
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    I heard fromthegrave likes it in the butt!!!

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    weak boost. both suck hard. in the first one especially the a. i think yout tryin too hard to make all the lettes look the same. second one doesnt even have a f in there.

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    heres some more







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    Here are some of my stuff..
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    Quote Originally Posted by lord_plankton View Post
    weak boost. both suck hard. in the first one especially the a. i think yout tryin too hard to make all the lettes look the same. second one doesnt even have a f in there.
    the F is cursive... like all the other letters. see how that works?

    try suicide.

    old shit.



    Quote Originally Posted by vman View Post
    those new tupac shakuras are dope.
    Quote Originally Posted by La Coka Nostra View Post
    chocolate milk is amazing.
    Quote Originally Posted by COBALT View Post
    I heard fromthegrave likes it in the butt!!!

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    any tips on color or design inside the letters?

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    your stuff is bad, simple n plain.

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    -meko: shits clean.
    -save: clean.
    -safe: keep working on it.
    SURGEone.

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    romero - looks dope. got some originality in there. refreshing
    blacktodafuture - it'd be cool to see some new stuff looking like the old stuff
    stigma - no 3d?
    tofe - i like the effects
    aces - try making your lines cleaner and you'll look legit. maybe tweak the e a little?
    Meko - legit as always

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    Hey are we supposed to give crits even if we are new? non of yall gave me any and i hear its supposed to be "give crits to get crits"


 

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