lmaoOriginally Posted by exitus
lmao
try doin a thick out line.. once you have done your out line wrapp the out side of your letters to make them wider...
example:
meko thats nice and simple
astro:1st one is garbage 2nd one has some flow to about the t that looks likes a y try to get ur bars same width ur t only has sharp angles not much round on it as opposed to the other letters
oh and astro ur R doesnt fit in at all with that piece handy is pretty sick tho, CRITS!
Last edited by Stigma02; 09-18-2010 at 04:42 PM.
Stigma- I take it that says atone? if so here are my thoughts...
The overall sense of flow is good, it seems symetric. But I think the structure is lacking. The middle bar of the A is too much make it smaller and not overlapping the right bar of the A. I don't get why there is like a middle horizontal bar thing in the middle of your T, thats wack. The bar in the middle of the O is...not cool. Middle bar of the E is wack too. Take your time clean up things, its just overall sloppy. But hey its a cool idea, rework it.
alright ill clean it up thx
and the tags suck too, it would of looked better without them.
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crits.id give them but i cant see anypics.i assume if i did i would tell you to keep practicing.because thats all i can say.
-meko.yours is the only one i can see.keep doin what your doin.shit looks dope.
just fucking around while coughin up a lung.
syrup in my cup maayne hold up.]
Meko- Good shit! Lovin that style, keep it up.
Tofe- The drop shadow's a bit messy, the top bar on the T is a little wacked imo and not really feeling the O either. The throwie's pretty nice though and so is the 3D.
Stigma and Astro- Letter structure...work on it...
Romero- Not too bad the curves on the S and the U seem a bit necessary though.
SEAZ finally got something with more than just SE or SZ lol I've been having a hard time with my A's with any style I've worked on but I like this one. Any thoughts? Oh and the outline's only blue/black because its a blue marker over the orange lol...
SEAZ
the thread needed a lil boost
weak boost. both suck hard. in the first one especially the a. i think yout tryin too hard to make all the lettes look the same. second one doesnt even have a f in there.
heres some more
Here are some of my stuff..
the F is cursive... like all the other letters. see how that works?
try suicide.
old shit.
any tips on color or design inside the letters?
your stuff is bad, simple n plain.
-meko: shits clean.
-save: clean.
-safe: keep working on it.
SURGEone.
romero - looks dope. got some originality in there. refreshing
blacktodafuture - it'd be cool to see some new stuff looking like the old stuff
stigma - no 3d?
tofe - i like the effects
aces - try making your lines cleaner and you'll look legit. maybe tweak the e a little?
Meko - legit as always
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