Blackbooks

*Patch! · 10-07-2010 11:20 PM

mone has somewhat of a generic style, and that does not look like it

**ViniVidiVici** · 10-07-2010 11:22 PM

so short answer no, okay hahahaha, probably looked more like it in my mind cuz of the just black and white....

**iloveCrackaine** · 10-07-2010 11:25 PM

vini i could understand y u said tht .. i disagree .. but hes dope anyway to me atleast

**Stigma02** · 10-08-2010 03:50 AM

ghost writer sick as fuck
simples crackaine

fucked up on the 3d with seth crits!?!
piece for a girl it better work cuz this shit took forever

**SzrZx** · 10-08-2010 07:47 AM

Originally Posted by ViniVidiVici

szxzx - stop, please, that's sloppy as fuck also, clean up your lines people.... geez what is everyone in a rush for? this is a blackbook, you don't have to rush, take your time and make your lines clean. but that is not the main thing that is wrong with your piece, it's just bad in general, go simple cuz your 3D is whack and all the letters are horrible.

dude are you serious?, yes granted my lines are sloppy but my letters are not bad at all theres a couple uneven lines but if you think my letters are "horrible", and then you call sviz' fuckyou piece "okay".. well then you shouldnt be critting anyones shit

**SzrZx** · 10-08-2010 07:58 AM

crackaine & stigma - do simples.

**Stigma02** · 10-08-2010 09:38 AM

do u not see the letters i kept the bar width the same and made the bottom bars bigger then the top i can point it out on ms paint if u dont see it?

**ViniVidiVici** · 10-08-2010 09:41 AM

Yes szrzx, and I stick with what I say, maybe your T and A would be alright not great, but alright, but your R and E are bad, real bad, and I'm not saying your T and A are good, like I said the bars are off and the lines are not clean and the 3D is bad all around. Don't post if ya don't want to hear the truth.

Stigma - The blue and pink one I can't fully make out all the letters, maybe rework that one. the Seth one I can make out the letters, but there is so much going on it's kinda distracting and makes it look messy imo

**Stigma02** · 10-08-2010 09:43 AM

yea i realized the seth was messy when i finished it but i couldnt change it :/
ill rework the blue and pink one it says ashlyn btw

**ViniVidiVici** · 10-08-2010 09:49 AM

yeah i saw the ash and the n, but the ly area was a little eh hectic I guess, but ya know according to srxzx I can't crit on anyone's pieces anymore cuz his was a fucking dope ass burner and I apparently have no clue about graff.... makes sense....

**SzrZx** · 10-08-2010 09:52 AM

lmao whatever dude i didnt have a wicked burner it was simples dumb ass
stigma - get rid of all the unnessary extensions for now. and some of your letters were lacking structure

**Stigma02** · 10-08-2010 09:54 AM

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does this clear it up i might put another outline around the l to make it stand out

**ViniVidiVici** · 10-08-2010 10:13 AM

I see you also don't fully understand sarcasm either srxzx, listen, you either take or leave what I said, I could fucking care less, but if you don't listen to others, you're gonna be in this section of the forums for a while.

and Stigma yes I see it now, but with all the extensions between the L and Y I couldn't before.

**SzrZx** · 10-08-2010 10:31 AM

k. well that as smple as my shits getting thanks though.

**Amends_Ego** · 10-08-2010 10:39 AM

Like vini said, y'all need to take some fucking critisism without bitching. Be happy you got any at all because you didn't leave none for nobody else. Self absorbed jackoffs.

And dude with all the crazy color schemes, do straight pencil sketches, it'll help you're steez ten-fold right now you just have crappy lettering hidden in chaotic color schemes. no good.