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  1. #104261

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    do u not see the letters i kept the bar width the same and made the bottom bars bigger then the top i can point it out on ms paint if u dont see it?

  2. #104262

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    Yes szrzx, and I stick with what I say, maybe your T and A would be alright not great, but alright, but your R and E are bad, real bad, and I'm not saying your T and A are good, like I said the bars are off and the lines are not clean and the 3D is bad all around. Don't post if ya don't want to hear the truth.

    Stigma - The blue and pink one I can't fully make out all the letters, maybe rework that one. the Seth one I can make out the letters, but there is so much going on it's kinda distracting and makes it look messy imo
    Last edited by ViniVidiVici; 10-08-2010 at 09:43 AM.
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  3. #104263

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    yea i realized the seth was messy when i finished it but i couldnt change it :/
    ill rework the blue and pink one it says ashlyn btw

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    yeah i saw the ash and the n, but the ly area was a little eh hectic I guess, but ya know according to srxzx I can't crit on anyone's pieces anymore cuz his was a fucking dope ass burner and I apparently have no clue about graff.... makes sense....
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  5. #104265

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    lmao whatever dude i didnt have a wicked burner it was simples dumb ass
    stigma - get rid of all the unnessary extensions for now. and some of your letters were lacking structure
    Last edited by SzrZx; 10-08-2010 at 10:00 AM.
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    <script src='http://img836.imageshack.us/shareable/?i=picture68902.jpg&p=tl' type='text/javascript'></script><noscript></noscript>

    does this clear it up i might put another outline around the l to make it stand out
    Last edited by Stigma02; 10-08-2010 at 10:04 AM.

  7. #104267

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    I see you also don't fully understand sarcasm either srxzx, listen, you either take or leave what I said, I could fucking care less, but if you don't listen to others, you're gonna be in this section of the forums for a while.

    and Stigma yes I see it now, but with all the extensions between the L and Y I couldn't before.
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    k. well that as smple as my shits getting thanks though.
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    Like vini said, y'all need to take some fucking critisism without bitching. Be happy you got any at all because you didn't leave none for nobody else. Self absorbed jackoffs.

    And dude with all the crazy color schemes, do straight pencil sketches, it'll help you're steez ten-fold right now you just have crappy lettering hidden in chaotic color schemes. no good.
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    your right my bad... im just defending myself cause i know my shit not that bad but whatever im done...
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  11. #104271

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    yeah i will probably just put some outlines to get rid of some of the extensions and connections between the L and Y

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    whats up with that RIP? is that the RIPSET

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    na im guessing thats a friend/family member that past away...
    Last edited by SzrZx; 10-08-2010 at 12:29 PM.
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    lol stigma even wen u wrote the letters in with ms paint i cant read it.... i cant even read the letters u wrote with the actually ms paint program....u fucking fail dudeee ahaha

    on another note i failed and was reading it upside down XD ahaha
    Last edited by Stuck; 10-08-2010 at 06:11 PM.
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    The FIRST letter i would put one more extension on the bottom arrow that goes dow to the RIGHT then shoots up and Acroose the whole page close to the end of the page and finish the arrow


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    Quote Originally Posted by Stuck View Post
    lol stigma even wen u wrote the letters in with ms paint i cant read it.... i cant even read the letters u wrote with the actually ms paint program....u fucking fail dudeee ahaha

    on another note i failed and was reading it upside down XD ahaha
    yeah that would do it u see em now?

    i think its more legible now?
    Last edited by Stigma02; 10-08-2010 at 07:02 PM.

  18. #104278

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    dont connect the letters and lose some add ons and it would be decent
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    Agreed
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    "Yo there is no escape!No recourse when I resort to forces of sorts reserved for bloodsports"
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