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    Quote Originally Posted by EXI View Post
    it is normal letter holy hell... I'm not just gunna sit there and draw letters off of my keyboard, I have a full binder of that already, It's time to add shit like that too it, I don't see why its so fucking bad as you proclaim
    its bad because you cant draw a straight line. The 3d is way off and the drips look like some nasty poopies... and what is the last letter supposed to be? Don't draw keyboard letters anymore, add some curves and shit and change the volume of the letters and stuff. Go to the new to graffiti thread and look at the shit about bars. If you cant realize that it looks horrible then you wont get better. damn


    maybe someone could crit my stuff at the top of da page

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    Quote Originally Posted by SYFER1 View Post
    theres already a dude wayyyy up that writes syfer

    and yo bumz...im feelin that..good shit
    Last edited by NosE2; 10-11-2010 at 09:47 AM.
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    if your name sucks, it sucks. For example, you write cumstache-oner. if you have a dope style, then good for you, respect. but you still write cumstache-oner. and that's pretty fucking gay, bro.
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    DON'T HATE ON HlM MAN, HE'S DOING IT FOR HIMSELF.
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    haha wtf does this has to do with an age??cause u older u think ur awesome or some shit??

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    @ thepekins, I'm diggin' that last piece in yellow, but I would remove that little add on you've got on the inside of the 'O'. None of the other letters has anything like that so it just looks out of place. But I like your drips and your yellow fill/outline. Letter structure is pretty good. The other two I'm not feelin' so much but I like the 'E's for both and the 'S' on the first one. Also, notice how in the 3rd one you've squished your letters together. I think the spacing between letters in the first one ruins it. As far as the second one goes, I'm just not feelin' the letters, especially the 'S'. Too many straight bars. Just my opinion anyways, not bad, just keep practicing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by W_G_O_N_E View Post
    finally picked a name and started with some simps , gonna keep workin on these letters , bottom one is for a battle
    i like the second one much better...
    mone, your char is nice, the piece not so great and well the hello my name is is executed well but old story..nice though.

    the outline only is also not bad...
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    haha cool u man u win, i give up
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    and to make it interesting and entertaining, whoever loses removes everything in his signature and puts the line "I am (winner's name)'s bitch" in bold capital letters instead. and never takes it off, or else gets banned. deal, fag?
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    i actually love plankton, fucking legend he is

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    Quote Originally Posted by SicK- View Post
    You need to calm down bro. dont ask for crits and get pissed when you get em. Just keep doing simple letters, style comes over time not in a few weeks. Look at Wgone's shit its awesome and its still simple.

    And heres my crit for your work. The letters look real shaky take your time for now on, lose all those silly ass drips and connections, and work on your bar width try and keep your letters all the same width.
    I'm just tired of doing simples and I'm just getting mad that every time I try to add my own stuff into it, it doesnt work out. I feel like I'm just trash with style lol.

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    Thepekins : liking y o's but not too keen on the e's bud, bottom e is the best tho,
    Exi : mixing upper and lower case is always a pain in the ass! But lose y drips n concentrate on y shape, overall shape and bars,
    Mogan : like y theme there man, looks sweet!
    Redeyes : solid colours and nice fill,
    Wgone : smashing it there dude!

    And 'truth' for a blackbook comp at my local shop, was well pissed off when I added the second green for the force field, shoulda used an orange or red or sumat to make it kick! Happy critting...

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    blawk (blow my mind)

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    BAnnngin

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    HAMMMERs

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    LEave us behind why dont we LEave you behind

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    Quote Originally Posted by WoRdSmYtH View Post
    Critz please.

    Wanting to develop this one further, so...
    Bumped for more critz.
    Last edited by WoRdSmYtH; 10-11-2010 at 05:54 PM.

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    forget all the little triangle shit, dunno what it says though..id suggest start over again or make from that letters evenly bars n see where it gets you..
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    and to make it interesting and entertaining, whoever loses removes everything in his signature and puts the line "I am (winner's name)'s bitch" in bold capital letters instead. and never takes it off, or else gets banned. deal, fag?
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    i actually love plankton, fucking legend he is

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    Yah it was just a 'final rough draft' if you know what I mean.
    I threw the points on there just to see what they'd look like.
    It says FRITE, btw.

    So you're saying keep the letter formation just try making the bars even width throughout?
    Last edited by WoRdSmYtH; 10-11-2010 at 05:53 PM.

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    Use the bar width of your F and make all ur letters sit straight. Dont worry about them blending in just yet, go for more of a slit overlap of each letter. Also scrap that E and lengthen ur R's right leg.

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    Pretty insecure about this one. Crits? The letter T is a stupid letter, it leave so much dead space.

    I'd give crits, but I don't think people would appreciate it much after seeing that ^
    Last edited by MakeItTakeIt; 10-11-2010 at 09:16 PM.
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    And yes thats a gucci fill.

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    I'll try out the suggestions for sure.
    But REDEYES, don't you think if I slim up the 'T' it'll totally kill it's form, especially the center bar?

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    "The letter T is a stupid letter" Lol word up
    “Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”

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    Quote Originally Posted by dangeri View Post
    Thepekins : liking y o's but not too keen on the e's bud, bottom e is the best tho,
    Exi : mixing upper and lower case is always a pain in the ass! But lose y drips n concentrate on y shape, overall shape and bars,
    Mogan : like y theme there man, looks sweet!
    Redeyes : solid colours and nice fill,
    Wgone : smashing it there dude!

    And 'truth' for a blackbook comp at my local shop, was well pissed off when I added the second green for the force field, shoulda used an orange or red or sumat to make it kick! Happy critting...
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    You got a crazy style dude lol.. your shit looks like a monster and shit
    “Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”

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    your shit looks like a monster and shit
    Haha! I think that's what he was goin' for Mogan... Stoned or what? Lol.

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    No if all the letters are the same width it should look good, you can bend and twist the T to help just dont make it so top heavy. Heres an example of that T sorta.


 

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