Pimp shit I am diggin the top one bro it really stands out...Originally Posted by W_G_O_N_E
finally picked a name and started with some simps , gonna keep workin on these letters , bottom one is for a battle
@EXI: You need to start way simple bro
a piece I am working on
“Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”
You need to calm down bro. dont ask for crits and get pissed when you get em. Just keep doing simple letters, style comes over time not in a few weeks. Look at Wgone's shit its awesome and its still simple.
And heres my crit for your work. The letters look real shaky take your time for now on, lose all those silly ass drips and connections, and work on your bar width try and keep your letters all the same width.
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one of my old ones , critz????
quote : FREAKING RACK IT!!! YOU ARE 11 AND CRAFTY AND FAST, SO RACK YOUR PAINT SON! STORES ARE TOO FAR? RIDE YOUR BIKE SON, IF YOU GOT LOVE FOR THIS SHIT YOU WILL GET PAINT AT ANY COST!
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crits?
@exi - you need more structure man. try messing around with some fills
they can normally get the creative juices flowing
especially if your still new to it
and try to remember to keep your lines straight
they look a little wobbly
(that syfer above is a good example of structure)
red eyes - noice. digging the forcefield and two tone
mogan - your chars are ill. the shading on the shirt is legit
Last edited by FuckTheFame; 10-11-2010 at 12:49 AM.
its bad because you cant draw a straight line. The 3d is way off and the drips look like some nasty poopies... and what is the last letter supposed to be? Don't draw keyboard letters anymore, add some curves and shit and change the volume of the letters and stuff. Go to the new to graffiti thread and look at the shit about bars. If you cant realize that it looks horrible then you wont get better. damn
maybe someone could crit my stuff at the top of da page
theres already a dude wayyyy up that writes syfer
and yo bumz...im feelin that..good shit
Last edited by NosE2; 10-11-2010 at 09:47 AM.
@ thepekins, I'm diggin' that last piece in yellow, but I would remove that little add on you've got on the inside of the 'O'. None of the other letters has anything like that so it just looks out of place. But I like your drips and your yellow fill/outline. Letter structure is pretty good. The other two I'm not feelin' so much but I like the 'E's for both and the 'S' on the first one. Also, notice how in the 3rd one you've squished your letters together. I think the spacing between letters in the first one ruins it. As far as the second one goes, I'm just not feelin' the letters, especially the 'S'. Too many straight bars. Just my opinion anyways, not bad, just keep practicing.
i like the second one much better...finally picked a name and started with some simps , gonna keep workin on these letters , bottom one is for a battle
mone, your char is nice, the piece not so great and well the hello my name is is executed well but old story..nice though.
the outline only is also not bad...
i actually love plankton, fucking legend he is
I'm just tired of doing simples and I'm just getting mad that every time I try to add my own stuff into it, it doesnt work out. I feel like I'm just trash with style lol.
Thepekins : liking y o's but not too keen on the e's bud, bottom e is the best tho,
Exi : mixing upper and lower case is always a pain in the ass! But lose y drips n concentrate on y shape, overall shape and bars,
Mogan : like y theme there man, looks sweet!
Redeyes : solid colours and nice fill,
Wgone : smashing it there dude!
And 'truth' for a blackbook comp at my local shop, was well pissed off when I added the second green for the force field, shoulda used an orange or red or sumat to make it kick! Happy critting...
blawk (blow my mind)
BAnnngin
HAMMMERs
LEave us behind why dont we LEave you behind
Wanting to develop this one further, so...Critz please.
Bumped for more critz.
Last edited by WoRdSmYtH; 10-11-2010 at 05:54 PM.
forget all the little triangle shit, dunno what it says though..id suggest start over again or make from that letters evenly bars n see where it gets you..
i actually love plankton, fucking legend he is
Yah it was just a 'final rough draft' if you know what I mean.
I threw the points on there just to see what they'd look like.
It says FRITE, btw.
So you're saying keep the letter formation just try making the bars even width throughout?
Last edited by WoRdSmYtH; 10-11-2010 at 05:53 PM.
Use the bar width of your F and make all ur letters sit straight. Dont worry about them blending in just yet, go for more of a slit overlap of each letter. Also scrap that E and lengthen ur R's right leg.
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